Effervescent - Pure5152
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Effervescent - Pure5152
after months of inactivity, I present you "Effervescent," my two-year anniversary track (a bit late though, eh? lack of inspiration, that's why).
song: "our xenopittan"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nAlc6UVSZXs
song: "our xenopittan"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nAlc6UVSZXs
pure5152- Member
Re: Effervescent - Pure5152
0:51 = end =
Like it a lotttt. Especially the stuff after 0:51
Like it a lotttt. Especially the stuff after 0:51
Votale- Member
Re: Effervescent - Pure5152
As usual excellent compact quirks with great flow.
Your style which includes strong and well executed prog and alt tricks put together into a complex and compact quirk with perfect quirky flow is strong throughout this track. Maybe even monotonous.
The deceleration and acceleration (e.g. 00:17), the recycling (e.g. 00:51-57), and the flow from one trick to the next are all perfectly done. There's really no necessary improvement I can point out; it might be cool to see you try something new though.
You've mastered this style of compact quirk so perhaps you should expand your range a little bit. Try XY, highspeed, manual, whatever.
Now as far as aspects of the video it's self goes...
The song was a little cheesy, I was reminded of Olecool's Revival, but it fit with the track's name and the video nicely.
The video editing was pretty plain and uncreative but that's alright.
Great work!
Your style which includes strong and well executed prog and alt tricks put together into a complex and compact quirk with perfect quirky flow is strong throughout this track. Maybe even monotonous.
The deceleration and acceleration (e.g. 00:17), the recycling (e.g. 00:51-57), and the flow from one trick to the next are all perfectly done. There's really no necessary improvement I can point out; it might be cool to see you try something new though.
You've mastered this style of compact quirk so perhaps you should expand your range a little bit. Try XY, highspeed, manual, whatever.
Now as far as aspects of the video it's self goes...
The song was a little cheesy, I was reminded of Olecool's Revival, but it fit with the track's name and the video nicely.
The video editing was pretty plain and uncreative but that's alright.
Great work!
JoaTrades- Member
Re: Effervescent - Pure5152
That was a pretty amazing track...Just make it longer than it would be perfect
~rawr- Member
Re: Effervescent - Pure5152
I HAVEN'T POSTED YET? i will do so now
epic track! and congrats on your second ani i can see a huuuge difference from type A, both the trick variation and the style. I really liked this track because... i dunno, it was flowy and relaxing? In my opinion this is better than the river(which was my favorite track at that time, other than incito)
EDIT: I watched it again. This shouldn't be compared with (just) the river, it should be compared with Volatile, Axis, The river, and a little bit of roborant. I enjoyed it more than all of them.
epic track! and congrats on your second ani i can see a huuuge difference from type A, both the trick variation and the style. I really liked this track because... i dunno, it was flowy and relaxing? In my opinion this is better than the river(which was my favorite track at that time, other than incito)
EDIT: I watched it again. This shouldn't be compared with (just) the river, it should be compared with Volatile, Axis, The river, and a little bit of roborant. I enjoyed it more than all of them.
linerage- Member
Re: Effervescent - Pure5152
Good work, Pure
The track was cool and it was fun and enjoyable to watch it. The music fitted to, only that I would like it more if you had found a playback-version of that song. The melody was good but the singer......
Anyway, keep up the amazing work
+ rep
The track was cool and it was fun and enjoyable to watch it. The music fitted to, only that I would like it more if you had found a playback-version of that song. The melody was good but the singer......
Anyway, keep up the amazing work
+ rep
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- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
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