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Post by pure5152 Thu Nov 25, 2010 9:56 pm

after months of inactivity, I present you "Effervescent," my two-year anniversary track (a bit late though, eh? xD lack of inspiration, that's why).

song: "our xenopittan"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nAlc6UVSZXs
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Post by Votale Thu Nov 25, 2010 9:57 pm

0:51 = end = Very Happy

Like it a lotttt. Especially the stuff after 0:51 Wink
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Post by Purtle Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:43 pm

that was too awesome.
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Post by JoaTrades Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:50 pm

As usual excellent compact quirks with great flow.

Your style which includes strong and well executed prog and alt tricks put together into a complex and compact quirk with perfect quirky flow is strong throughout this track. Maybe even monotonous.

The deceleration and acceleration (e.g. 00:17), the recycling (e.g. 00:51-57), and the flow from one trick to the next are all perfectly done. There's really no necessary improvement I can point out; it might be cool to see you try something new though.

You've mastered this style of compact quirk so perhaps you should expand your range a little bit. Try XY, highspeed, manual, whatever.

Now as far as aspects of the video it's self goes...

The song was a little cheesy, I was reminded of Olecool's Revival, but it fit with the track's name and the video nicely.

The video editing was pretty plain and uncreative but that's alright.

Great work! Very Happy
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Post by CamQuartr Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:04 am

soooooooooo cooool!

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Post by ~rawr Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:10 am

That was a pretty amazing track...Just make it longer than it would be perfect
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Post by linerage Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:14 am

I HAVEN'T POSTED YET? i will do so now

epic track! and congrats on your second ani xD i can see a huuuge difference from type A, both the trick variation and the style. I really liked this track because... i dunno, it was flowy and relaxing? In my opinion this is better than the river(which was my favorite track at that time, other than incito)

EDIT: I watched it again. This shouldn't be compared with (just) the river, it should be compared with Volatile, Axis, The river, and a little bit of roborant. I enjoyed it more than all of them. :|
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Post by TigerXLine Fri Nov 26, 2010 4:56 am

Good work, Pure Wink

The track was cool and it was fun and enjoyable to watch it. The music fitted to, only that I would like it more if you had found a playback-version of that song. The melody was good but the singer......

Anyway, keep up the amazing work Wink

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