Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
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Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
... or watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLNURXu-ATg
Finally this beast is done, and i'm pretty happy by the result.
EPIC thanks to Lukking for letting me scene this track. Also thanks to you if you participated in the collab. Hope you enjoy!
Last edited by Rapto on Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:20 am; edited 1 time in total
Derpinator- Member
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Sorry, I forgot that... How long do you think it usually takes?
Derpinator- Member
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
^- thisInu wrote:Next time post AFTER it's processed
my videos take ~5min :/
Catz- Member
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Baw?Inu wrote:Next time post AFTER it's processed
Next time don't try watching it until AFTER it's processed.
Back in my day, kids had more patience.
Nirobi- Member
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Is it just me or does your video take very looong time to upload?
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
^ So trueTigerLine7 wrote:Is it just me or does your video take very looong time to upload?
Will edit this post with review later.
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Unless it's the worlds biggest file, I'd say something went wrong
Try uploading it again if it doesn't work within 15 minutes or so.
Try uploading it again if it doesn't work within 15 minutes or so.
LineRiderGjert- Line Rider Legend
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
LineRiderGjert wrote:Unless it's the worlds biggest file, I'd say something went wrong
Try uploading it again if it doesn't work within 15 minutes or so.
One time 1 minute long video I made that was 12 Megabytes took less than 1 minute to upload but took about 12 hours to process. For no reason either. It was the same format video I had used before with even bigger files. It's strange.
iPi- Member
- Manualologist
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Oh! Come on!
I want to see the video!
I want to see the video!
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
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Sometimes teh videos are faulty if you upload them directly from vegas, etc.
Upload it again
Upload it again
Smitsy- Member
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^agreed. I uploaded mine directly from wmm and it didn't work. I tried saving it as an avi file and it worked better.
About my review, see youtube
Also, it felt kind of awkward how you scened the portions of the track with lines, but left the rest, background and stuff blank. But that's just a tiny side note of me nitpicking.
About my review, see youtube
Also, it felt kind of awkward how you scened the portions of the track with lines, but left the rest, background and stuff blank. But that's just a tiny side note of me nitpicking.
Last edited by Orthuss on Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:52 pm; edited 1 time in total
Orthuss- Member
- Walruss
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Upload it on the actual youtube site, and make sure you don't do anything fishy while it's uploading
EDIT: Great job on the scenery! I am glad to see a full length scenery track for once.
I think scenery is definetly the thing for you, keep it up.
EDIT: Great job on the scenery! I am glad to see a full length scenery track for once.
I think scenery is definetly the thing for you, keep it up.
Last edited by Cereal on Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:24 pm; edited 1 time in total
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Well, it finally uploaded.
Very nice track
/nonspecific-comment
Very nice track
/nonspecific-comment
iPi- Member
- Manualologist
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Kinda reminded me of early IoneRendar scenery. Pretty nice, but for this kind of scenery it needed more wow moments.
Commandercoke- Line Rider Legend
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There were pros and cons
the pros were that there wasn't a single messy spot, which, is a major plus. I also liked that the music FIT (this is different then it sync'd)
cons were that it was pretty bare, i mean the track lines were filled in, but thats it. LOOOTS of white. It also seamed, a bit repetitive, idk i felt like i was watching the same scenery over and over again (I watched it 4 times). But the major con was that it looked like you didn't have fun with it. It really seamed like you wanted to impress the LR community and perfect every single line. Which i mean, perfection is a good thing, but impressing people TO GET NOTICED is actually a pretty slutty () thing to do, you should do these things for yourself, and not so much for other people.
i c potential though
the pros were that there wasn't a single messy spot, which, is a major plus. I also liked that the music FIT (this is different then it sync'd)
cons were that it was pretty bare, i mean the track lines were filled in, but thats it. LOOOTS of white. It also seamed, a bit repetitive, idk i felt like i was watching the same scenery over and over again (I watched it 4 times). But the major con was that it looked like you didn't have fun with it. It really seamed like you wanted to impress the LR community and perfect every single line. Which i mean, perfection is a good thing, but impressing people TO GET NOTICED is actually a pretty slutty () thing to do, you should do these things for yourself, and not so much for other people.
i c potential though
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CamQuartr wrote:There were pros and cons
. But the major con was that it looked like you didn't have fun with it. It really seamed like you wanted to impress the LR community and perfect every single line. Which i mean, perfection is a good thing, but impressing people TO GET NOTICED is actually a pretty slutty () thing to do, you should do these things for yourself, and not so much for other people.
i c potential though
Isn't that what everybody does these days? I mean, I do it, he does it, we all are trying to impress these days, that's why there are so little tracks coming out these days.
But I do agree with u, that this track does seemed a little too show off. I liked the rocket tho? O-o sorry not a good reviewer
EDIT: also, with all e bold friction scenery, it made the rocket seem fake... I know it's not cos it has ur name in it... Lol just sayin, not really a bad thing, not Really a good thing.
linerage- Member
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the scenery wasnt very original and have been done 1000 tiems before which made me kinda :/
also calling it mff 4 was kinda unfair, cus the next time they ake a track they ahve to call it mff5
but anyways, good job, the scenery is pretty good and smooth, all u need is some wow moments, then it will be pretty damn good
also calling it mff 4 was kinda unfair, cus the next time they ake a track they ahve to call it mff5
but anyways, good job, the scenery is pretty good and smooth, all u need is some wow moments, then it will be pretty damn good
MartinJulenissen- Member
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Great job! Like it when Bosh moved faster
Its a little white, witch was okay when Bosh went faster. And btw, I saw that you use some of my "Owergrown Plant" scenery in there!
Please make more! It was enjoyable!
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Its a little white, witch was okay when Bosh went faster. And btw, I saw that you use some of my "Owergrown Plant" scenery in there!
Please make more! It was enjoyable!
+ rep
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
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TigerLine7 wrote:Great job! Like it when Bosh moved faster
Its a little white, witch was okay when Bosh went faster. And btw, I saw that you use some of my "Owergrown Plant" scenery in there!
Please make more! It was enjoyable!
+ rep
ya i'm using those overgrown vine thingies in my track
Yobanjojoe- Member
- swag
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
Yobanjojoe wrote:TigerLine7 wrote:Great job! Like it when Bosh moved faster
Its a little white, witch was okay when Bosh went faster. And btw, I saw that you use some of my "Owergrown Plant" scenery in there!
Please make more! It was enjoyable!
+ rep
ya i'm using those overgrown vine thingies in my track
Great!
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
MartinJulenissen wrote:the scenery wasnt very original and have been done 1000 tiems before which made me kinda :/
also calling it mff 4 was kinda unfair, cus the next time they ake a track they ahve to call it mff5
but anyways, good job, the scenery is pretty good and smooth, all u need is some wow moments, then it will be pretty damn good
well, in the start i called it mff3 scened, but then luk said mff4, so i guess it was ok, when the starter of the series said it
Derpinator- Member
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
I decided not to edit my previous post.
Anyways I guess I liked it. It was well done, not really a line out of place and it looked pretty good too.
However, there was tonnes of white space. Seriously, add at least some small lines all over to fill up those huge white spaces. Also, most it it was just thick lined hills with different patterns in them which didn't really fill them up. I do know that this is a big track and it would need quite a lot of time to actually fill in most of the space, but it was basically thick lined hills all over. I wasn't too keen on it, sorry. I liked the change to the rocket though, it looked much better, shame we couldn't see the whole thing in the track itself, but I expect that it'll be in LAotW soon enough. Back to the track, I don't think there were many 'wow' moments in it, it was the same things over and over. However, I did quite like those cracks in the 'hill' so that it wasn't just thick lines. Shame you didn't build on them to fill up more space.
Overall I thought it was pretty good, just nothing fantastic. Next time try to make some new scenery styles instead of just thick lines. Good luck with your other scenery projects!
Anyways I guess I liked it. It was well done, not really a line out of place and it looked pretty good too.
However, there was tonnes of white space. Seriously, add at least some small lines all over to fill up those huge white spaces. Also, most it it was just thick lined hills with different patterns in them which didn't really fill them up. I do know that this is a big track and it would need quite a lot of time to actually fill in most of the space, but it was basically thick lined hills all over. I wasn't too keen on it, sorry. I liked the change to the rocket though, it looked much better, shame we couldn't see the whole thing in the track itself, but I expect that it'll be in LAotW soon enough. Back to the track, I don't think there were many 'wow' moments in it, it was the same things over and over. However, I did quite like those cracks in the 'hill' so that it wasn't just thick lines. Shame you didn't build on them to fill up more space.
Overall I thought it was pretty good, just nothing fantastic. Next time try to make some new scenery styles instead of just thick lines. Good luck with your other scenery projects!
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Manuals For Fun 4 - RAPTO
@ wolf, my main goal in this track were to make a very simple scenery track, just like rabid did. But as i can see it became too simple I think that Catalyst Scened will be a lot easier to fill in cuz of the tech montain theme i choosed. Overall, thanks for your post, im going to use it in CS to make it better than this
@all, thanks for all the critic/advices. I'm going to use them in CS
@all, thanks for all the critic/advices. I'm going to use them in CS
Derpinator- Member
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