Deliverance, a scened track preview by KillinTime2792.

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track goes for some 3 minutes, expected line totals over 150,000, this is just the start should be out by febuary 2011. any suggestions on what kind of scenery style to use for the track would be appreciated (landscape abstract etc)

Look through some mangas, you'll find a style. There's some good manga art in D gray man and bleach. You'll find a scenery style there.

Looks pretty cool.

Reminds me of Make Believe, because that had characters and such like that in it.

Good luck finishing

ow yeah make believe indeed. now there is a difference, but i dont think ur at remake beleive manga good yet... keep it up tho, and listen to what wolf sed, they are really inspiring. whatch bleach too, i think they have a show. or rather just watch edgier animes (i.e. not pokemon). anyway, keep it up, cant wait for its release!!

don't hurt yourself with that big of a project setup if you've never made a serious scenery track before. You'll either not finish or you'll finish and then people won't like it as much you'd hoped. At least those are the most likely outcomes.

Start with something smaller first.

rabid squirrel wrote:Start with something smaller first.

i already have like 42 tracks i can't release cuz whenever i record something all i get is a black screen lol. it's the biggest thing i have planned yes but it's not the first big thing i have (track with 4K lines for example)

EDIT: oh yes and wolf i already watch bleach and read the manga, but in bleach most of the time they spend fighting around buildings, i'll look at that other manga you mentioned though.

KillinTime2792 wrote:

rabid squirrel wrote:Start with something smaller first.

i already have like 42 tracks i can't release cuz whenever i record something all i get is a black screen lol. it's the biggest thing i have planned yes but it's not the first big thing i have (track with 4K lines for example)

EDIT: oh yes and wolf i already watch bleach and read the manga, but in bleach most of the time they spend fighting around buildings, i'll look at that other manga you mentioned though.

Lol. I reopened my recording shop, if you care to send those to me to be recorded.

Meh, 4k lines really isn't that much though...
Not compared to 150k at least. Try scaling upwards in density slowly.

Absox wrote:Meh, 4k lines really isn't that much though...

4K track lines, my largest scened track atm is about 52K.

oh and if i can find the .sol i'll send you a few tracks to record for me .

EDIT: update

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I like the way you shade
It really looks nice, and I really can't wait to see it!
Whats your name on Youtube?

DeathknightDK2 wrote:I like the way you shade
It really looks nice, and I really can't wait to see it!
Whats your name on Youtube?

KillinTime2792, i have 2 tracks uploaded but it's not from lack of trying blasted hypercam...

DeathknightDK2 wrote:I like the way you shade
It really looks nice, and I really can't wait to see it!

This. Exactly what I wanted to say.

shading the opening monument done wooo 2900 lines lol now to start scening some track, going with a heavy-set tribal/abstract style so expect lots of black.

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Don't spoil everything please.

I like the details on the skulls and so on.. Nice

update time wee! tell me what you think

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if overall response is positive then i'll continue and get someone to record a bit for me.

EDIT: bah linerider zoom bug messing up the black parts >_<

positive i heart it. it's just... don't make all the platforms like that. i dont think that's a good looking platform, just my opinion. but the monument is ownage. but... if sometihng has fluffy bunny ears... they shouldn't be wearing something like... that... right? sorry i dont watch manga lots

linerage wrote:if sometihng has fluffy bunny ears...

fluffy... bunny... ears? what kind of whacked-out bunny do you own lol.

oh and all the platforms will look different but it's the general theme i'm setting, will update in this forum every 5K lines.

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just showin some track, nothing new (cuz i'm keeping it seceret WEEHEE!) yes it's moderately fast, he's lineglitching atm XD.