Orbital Inverse - IGLima

by IGLima Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:56 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5bSLdshqxyE

A short manual track by me.
Nothing special here. (Only 1 g-well though

)

Comments and criticism are appreciated.

by crash2burn Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:01 pm

It was good, but be more creative

Try:
-Recycling
-Loops

-Super Awesome Tricks with manuals

by **Cereal** Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:31 pm

Wow, although there were unsmooth curves, there were a few things I love about it.

-It had great flow
-Some parts were original
-You had nice tail/nose ratio

Nice job! I would +rep you, but I can't rep anymore today since I kept -repping random people's post. Very Happy

by Purtle Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:48 pm

I liked it.

I DEFINITELY approved of the tailie count. Make sure to have that many next time, or more even! Super happy about that.

The curves were alright, but in general could have been a bit smoother. Not complaining a whole lot about them though.

I liked the pace.

Thumbs Up

(does this forum have that smiley?)

by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:03 pm

good job! but I'd suggest making your manuals a bit more circular x)

also, for a suggestion, try using a bit of integration! it really helps up the entertainment value