Evil Beauty- Hanuman
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Evil Beauty- Hanuman
My first track attempt, dont have much experience but would welcome all feedback/criticism/tips.
Thx.
Thx.
Hanuman- Member
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Hey there! It's very refreshing to see a new first track! And synced aswell? Awesome!
My tip for future trackmaking:
Try to envision how you want bosh to move, and then place lines accordingly. sometimes you'll get what you want, other times you'll get something much cooler!!
My tip for future trackmaking:
Try to envision how you want bosh to move, and then place lines accordingly. sometimes you'll get what you want, other times you'll get something much cooler!!
anton- Member
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Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Was hoping you used this song when I read the title, not disappointed <3
Pretty darn good for your first track! I find it hard to tell you what you should improve on. Maybe you can tell me some things you were have trouble with?
Pretty darn good for your first track! I find it hard to tell you what you should improve on. Maybe you can tell me some things you were have trouble with?
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Thanks Rafael
I guess I have a bit of trouble with flings and gravity wells but it is probs more of a practice thing. Same with kramuals animation etc.
I have a plan for a huge track in mind in the future, but I have to hone my skills a lot first.
I guess I have a bit of trouble with flings and gravity wells but it is probs more of a practice thing. Same with kramuals animation etc.
I have a plan for a huge track in mind in the future, but I have to hone my skills a lot first.
Hanuman- Member
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
This is an amazing first track, I have to say. I think you're starting to get the hang of things quite nicely.
As far as tips go... I think the single biggest thing that improved my track making was patience. If you have an idea of what you want to do, take the extra time and make it look exactly like you envisioned it. I used to throw lines out there and if it worked and was kinda close to what I wanted, I would keep it. But redrawing them over and over until you get the perfect one can make a big difference.
As far as tips go... I think the single biggest thing that improved my track making was patience. If you have an idea of what you want to do, take the extra time and make it look exactly like you envisioned it. I used to throw lines out there and if it worked and was kinda close to what I wanted, I would keep it. But redrawing them over and over until you get the perfect one can make a big difference.
Apple- Moderator
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Thx Apple
I'm trying to do that with the track im working on now, im grateful for there being tutorials such as yours available on you tube (im actually watching your kramual one right now lol), your one on gravity wells was particularly useful (im jweber544, the guy who posted the video response to it). I use to play line rider a lot as a kid, so rediscovering it and finding so many new techniques is awesome.
I'm trying to do that with the track im working on now, im grateful for there being tutorials such as yours available on you tube (im actually watching your kramual one right now lol), your one on gravity wells was particularly useful (im jweber544, the guy who posted the video response to it). I use to play line rider a lot as a kid, so rediscovering it and finding so many new techniques is awesome.
Hanuman- Member
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Glad I can help, and nice to see you again! Welcome to the forum!
Apple- Moderator
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Nice first track! I quite enjoyed the non-quirky bits. The airtime + pinch at 0:55 was surprising and timed well!
Also remember you don't have to make gravity wells and flings to make a good track. Whatever feels good to ya
Also remember you don't have to make gravity wells and flings to make a good track. Whatever feels good to ya
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Thx Helios
i tried to use gravity wells for the piano key parts and regular curves for the higher pitched vocas where i could. I want to master every line rider technique i can so my next track may not be as elegant as this one, more me trying a lot of different stuff hehe
i tried to use gravity wells for the piano key parts and regular curves for the higher pitched vocas where i could. I want to master every line rider technique i can so my next track may not be as elegant as this one, more me trying a lot of different stuff hehe
Hanuman- Member
Re: Evil Beauty- Hanuman
Thx Sheldon
I will, once I have got my skill level up a lot I have a big track in mind.
I will, once I have got my skill level up a lot I have a big track in mind.
Hanuman- Member
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