Experiment, part 4

Feedback and constructive criticism appreciated

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BMwLGyGLCs4

WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I'm laughing out loud here, this is pure genius

You're improving really fast! The smooth curves were great, and I loved the personality from the embedded text in the track.

Needs an all boing boing section tho

the penguins took this from an 8/10 to a 12/10, good job on that

i just realized, this track is missing papyrus font title cards, with each letter a different size than the last

Wait Rabid made a fling and it's after 2009?

Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.

Sheldon wrote:Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.

Or get banged by

Fauxfyre wrote:

Sheldon wrote:Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.

Or get banged by

I prefer to provide the bang.

I bang to provide the prefer

pinch loop would be really cool to see, i wonder why no one's really done that before...

Track needs an intro. I am thinking bold comic sans, underlined.

Improving rapidly though. Only part I would change is the offsled part. I don't know about everyone else, but I am not a fan. Keep it up

CRAWL. MANUAL.

OH MY GOD THAT IS A GENIUS CONCEPT
You're doing heavily synced OFFSLED! So fucking cool to waaaatch! and the zooming in sync was cool, too. I love you, and I feel like this is like a reference to that one offsled similar to this that had a sudden metal screaming band in the background. It makes me think that these experiments have been like important track references, like each one is going to be one track in the exceptional playlist and you're only capturing one element of it but it's clearly relevant and it's all tied together to each interesting track, like you're highlighting the inventiveness of each track


I am sooo high guys