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Post by Getthim Tue Dec 08, 2015 7:00 am

here is my latest solo track, had been working on it at least 6 months, on and off



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpI-SeeDuOo&feature=youtu.be


sorry it took a while
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Post by Lukking Tue Dec 08, 2015 7:25 am

very nice to see the extended concept of intro. Good job at being creative!
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Post by anton Tue Dec 08, 2015 9:09 am

YES! Thanks for expanding upon the concept!!

Especially enjoyed 1:25 - 1:48
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Post by Apple Tue Dec 08, 2015 5:30 pm

Anton wrote:Especially enjoyed 1:25 - 1:48

At around 1:33 where you can't see the line shifting at all was my favorite part. Pretty trippy and I liked it a lot.

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Post by theacp127 Tue Dec 08, 2015 9:03 pm

That was really cool. You executed that idea really well.
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Post by Sheldon Wed Dec 09, 2015 1:03 am

I expected a lot from this track, it was basically what I expected, with some exceptions. I feel like the transitions between the the orientations could have been more streamlined, for example kramual cannons. I just kinda of felt like flatsled was over used in a track where it didn't belong. But all that aside, it was a really good and experimental track, so it was a success in my book.
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Post by Orthuss Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:55 pm

Yesss my song Very Happy

Loved your take on upwards, leftwards, and downwards intro-style. I do agree with sheldon that the transitions could have been a tad better and that maybe you could have found a matching song from the beginning, those two things would have greatly benefitted this kind of track. But that's just for future reference for these kinds of intro-style tracks. This was a fun watch, great job.
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Dec 11, 2015 7:12 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Re0e9O4V7D0

Quick review!
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Post by Getthim Sat Dec 19, 2015 2:42 pm

just watched the quick review, thank you very much for doing it
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