New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

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New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:21 am

*SORRY FOURM HAS DISABLED MY LINK* MY NeW TrAck. www . youtube . com/watch?v=bdCCFwl6zTU&list=UUlqSxIPrx4qm1U9p_OMljDw&index=1&feature=plcp

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:22 am

JUST REMOVE THE SPACES!

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Yobanjojoe on Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:14 am


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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Yobanjojoe on Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:16 am

Was decent for you first track Thumbs Up

Not much to say really.

Just keep playing and improving, can't wait to see more from you Smile

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 8:13 am

Thanks mate. The stupid fourm makes me wait 3 more days untill i can post external links :-/

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by LineMagiX on Sat Jul 28, 2012 8:55 am

haha love that wrtl at the end. represent! 8D

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 9:52 am

my next one is better

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Opal Rider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:37 pm

This actually isn't bad, for being one of your first. There are plenty of scenery tutorials on YouTube, and a few fellow sceners on the site who would gladly answer questions (not me, unfortunately). As for the track, it seemed to go downwards quite a bit. Maybe try to make him go upwards every once in a while to mix it up.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:40 pm

Thanks Opal!

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Cereal on Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:45 pm

My main bit of advice is to be directional. Try going up or left rather than down or right all the time. Wink

Fun little bit, though. And any track that has "WRtL" in it has to be good.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:04 pm

That was short...
I like how not messy this looks for a first track, you kept everything looking nice. Wasn't too great but there wasn't really anything bad to say about it other than try making the track go up at sometimes too and put just a little texture details into the surrounding rocks.
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Oh, and record the track at the right speed. It is kind of annoying when it is sped up like that, even when it was just a little.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:43 pm

I'm sorry. my computer runs Linux and that is the best qualty i can do. And i am improving on my next track.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by pure5152 on Sat Jul 28, 2012 10:09 pm

it was great for what it is. nostalgically reminded me of the good old days, where track quality didn't matter so much as the story.

..and then it ended so abruptly that I didn't even get a chance to comprehend what I just saw. (in some cases that's a good thing but in this case it's not.) As consequence here I am sitting in front of the computer discontented and feeling robbed. in all honestly it felt like an intro rather than a track.

but it was a first track. you can only go up from here. so soar you go Very Happy
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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Th3ManicRider on Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:20 am

Thanks Pure.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Orthuss on Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:38 pm

Nice track Smile As Pure said, you can only get better Smile Try to extend your tracks a bit more, too.

Also, nice Moonbase Alpha reference in your sig.

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Re: New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

Post by Stallie on Mon Jul 30, 2012 6:41 pm

Nice short, it was a neat track and the scenery was alright as well, keep it up. Smile
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