Final Destination: The Future World ~ Kramwood

As pointed out by my brother, because of the font, If you look at the title screen the right way it looks like it says "anal destination".

Anyway here it is! It' all blue! Credits and slow motion of tricks are after the colored version.


Sol: mediafire.com ?dn3hib8fb95hmg1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fX1gI3EVucg

As always, your "epic" tracks never fail to amaze me! This definitely had a consistant use of off-the-chain tricks at their maximum strength.

Music transition was a bit awkward in the beginning, but the track itself synced pretty nicely. Ending also could have been a bit "crisper".

At this point I'm just nitpicking, though. Excellent job Kram!

Omg, dude, I think this is probably the best track you have made yet, I like the style, control and density of the track. One mistake about the music was it kind of started too early; in the beginning the flow and sync didn't go to well. Other than that you did an amazing job, and I would like to see more of this from you soon.

That recycling fling section, was incredible.

Great work!

yeah i agree with cam that fling recycling part was super baaywus

you're so pro kram <3

Heyoo, I'm an inspiration what?! Pardon me while I spray my drink all over the table.

This track was absolutely amazing. I honestly thought I only went on for a little while before looking up at the second count and saw it was in the 100s range. I really like the progression of styles in the track, from the generic quirk, through alt, recycling, and finally high speed. The transitions were really nice, and I honestly don't have any negative comments, so I'm just going to complain that your wells were messy, even if I don't mean it.

Watched the video without reading anything, saw the title scene, read Anal Destination, yelled out HAH! To be looked at weird by parents.

Then read the OP, then had a huge grin on my face, lol, anal destination.

It's hard to find criticism in tracks like these without forcing it out. Only thing I can say is that you relied on shoulder flings in some of the compact parts often. That's somewhat forced too.

Dat. Has. Power! And lots of awesomeness

Do I have to say something everyone else has said? I would pick something bad out of the track that you could 'work on' but I can't....

Awesome track, no complaints except that I was expecting more track near the end when he was going ~120 ppf.

Also, you didn't end it with an upwards airtime which made me happy

Terrific! Every part was fantastic (especially the triple recycled fling), although I felt like some of the transitions were a little abrupt. The cohesiveness of the track was unexpectedly good too. One of your best for sure.

@Cereal wrote:
Music transition was a bit awkward in the beginning, but the track itself synced pretty nicely. Ending also could have been a bit "crisper".

as a drummer I say I did a pretty good job with the audio.

@Stallie wrote: One mistake about the music was it kind of started too early

actually the main song started a little bit late.

Rainbow Dash wrote:It's hard to find criticism in tracks like these without forcing it out. Only thing I can say is that you relied on shoulder flings in some of the compact parts often. That's somewhat forced too.

Yeah there were a few parts in there I didn't like while recording it one of them being that small compact part. others being that inverted hand section after the inv. nose fling.

@Opal Rider wrote:Heyoo, I'm an inspiration what?! Pardon me while I spray my drink all over the table.

I list inspiration of people who have made me want to play more line rider. After you released paradox and abandon it made me want to play more lr and after both of those tracks I had open up fd. because of that I progressed farther on the track than I would have with out you releasing those tracks. that's why I listed you as inspiration.

As for everyone else thanks for all the possitive feedback

When I was refering to the "ending", I didn't mean the music, but the actual track itself. You tend to have a trend of anticlimactic endings in your tracks. (Which isn't a big deal, but it's just something that I've noticed)

Really reminded me of a modern-day Lilac Wine. Although, I shouldn't say modern, because this would probably be more into the realm of future quirk; I can see you think so too 'Future world' :p. Although, maybe a better word would be ultramodern, or visionary, to pay homage to Hedge lol.

I'm proud to be on the first list of your inspirations, thank you. The track itself is an exhilarating display of both your technical, and artistic mastery. I'm probably not the only viewer feeling the desire to make high-speed quirk stirring inside of us after viewing it. Awesome job again Kram. I hope this isn't your "Final Destination" however, because I look forward to your next tracks!

This is probably the definition of future quirk, and I loved every second. It's like a modern-day Incito. The only thing it's missing is the labeling of the tricks and the awesome first song.

Definitely worth watching a couple thousand more times.

Great job. The only thing was that this track (IMO) built less tension than Universe. For the rest, amazing man.

here's some criticism. are you aware you named your track "Anal Destination"?

It's kind of hard to take it seriously when you're being so childish.

that aside the track was pretty meh considering your standards. I was expecting far more from the 120+ highspeed and the music starting late threw me off

OMG Kram you're a f***ing Master !!!

That was pretty fantastic. It didn't entertain me all that much though, so I'm going to rewatch and figure out why.

- The beginning felt awkward with the music - you did sync it, but before the sync it felt like you were just killing time and making random crap, which didn't fit and didn't convey your intention very well.
- The random spikes in music volume were really obnoxious and distracting.
- It felt like you lost a lot of steam around the 50 second mark, while the music was still full force.
- the speeding back up didn't feel like it synced well, which was annoying after you had worked at syncing before.
- The ending felt a little... blah... I don't know why exactly. Just sort of lame.

That said, the tricks were blew-my-socks-off impressive, and I really liked the fast/slow/fast sections structure to the whole thing. I particularly liked everything from 0:27 to 0:45, the crazy fling recycling around 1:15, and the highspeed stuff around 1:45. You're really really good at this, I think that you just need to think your ideas through more thoroughly to make a true masterpiece.