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Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:09 pm



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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by StingReay on Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:27 pm

You know you can embed videos here, right? Click the icon that looks like a film strip.

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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by Pinter on Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:05 pm

cool track, nice flings, You should only work on the smootness of your curves Wink

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Post by efrazable on Mon Mar 26, 2012 3:18 pm

When I watch nub tracks, I think of things to say for them to get better.

When I watch this track, I did not think of anything that i could say for you to get better.

It was that good.

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Post by rich on Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:00 pm

Umm yeah, came here for the pleasure of watching your second line rider track(am i right?). But let me get some new pants. That left me speechless. The amount of skill that you jumped is just breath taking. I can't wait for your next track when you're better than hedge. Some things you could work on:
  • Stronger flings
  • Stronger manuals
  • maybe all blue? Smile
  • smoother curves. (im not one to talk about that.)

But other than that, you're a boss. A BOSS!
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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:58 pm

Thanks guys! The feedback I got after the first track really helped with this one.
I'm not that much of a fan of doing all-blue though. Maybe once I get better at all-blue manuals, alt-flings, etc I'll try one

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Post by Ph0enix on Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:25 pm

@efrazable wrote:When I watch nub tracks, I think of things to say for them to get better.

When I watch this track, I did not think of anything that i could say for you to get better.

It was that good.
Couldn't hav said it better my self.

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Post by Sssschiller on Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:36 pm

Nice track! I got an oldschool feeling because of the Muse music Very Happy

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Post by weebit on Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:55 pm

Second track, WTF!!!

Dude, if you're excelling that much you will be graet at line rider.
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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by Cereal on Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:34 pm

You're definitely a fast learner! Even though the flings are a bit weak, they are flings nonetheless. (Seriously, I went through a 2 year phase where my flings were poop)

I think that you would enjoy slow/mid-paced manuals a bit more. Once you master even pressuring, you can branch out to all of the high speed manual shiz if that's what you really enjoy. Wink

Oh, and dat butt manual @ 1:34 xD

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Post by theacp127 on Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:58 pm

I started linerider about two or so months ago, and you've learned way faster than I have. I still have tons of trouble getting a basic fling. Great track. Thumbs Up

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Post by rabid squirrel on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:57 am

well, you're already better than me at quirk xD

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Post by SETH on Tue Mar 27, 2012 9:51 am

pretty nice ! flow and trick are great, keep it up

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Post by Lukking on Thu Mar 29, 2012 4:18 pm

pretty oldscool^^ like

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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by Jam on Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:40 pm

Can't say how much I miss the times when it was a common suggestion to master manuals before moving on to quirk.

Your quirk was better than your manuals, and it felt very old-school. Work on the smoothness of your curves and try to keep an even pressure throughout your manuals. In Line Rider, bright, your future is. Hope to see more from you soon.
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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist

Post by katamariroller22 on Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:13 pm

Great job! Very fun to watch and all that stuff. The only thing that I could possibly see that you could improve on would be to get more powerful flings, and maybe more variety in the quirks.
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