RosED Scenery short

Link: RosED

Wiibit made the track, I made the scenery, named RosED because it is all RED and because of the monument

Thanks to Kramwood for recording and editing, special thanks to Chuggers for recording also.

Enjoy! Please give me criticism on my scenery, looking to improve!

shoulda used my recordings


I liked the flower at the end, and the rest was cool too.

As for the track, maybe work on minimizing head-riding making some of the recycles better.

I give it a 5 out of 10 (whatacoolgradingsystem)

Well, given how difficult it is to make all red work, I think this is really good. The scenery was simplistic, but effective...but then I saw the rose, which really is a powerful monument. All in all, I like this little surge in small scenery tracks and hope you guys enjoyed making it!

Wow, Ryder, that was my first time seeing all of the scenery. And for your first time scening that was pretty freaking awesome.

Honestly, probably one of my favourites to watch lately. No, it wasn't the best quick, high speed manual that everyone tries for, but it was a fun track that had some awesome, well done, yet somewhat simplistic (except the rose) scenery. Great job guys.

Traxis wrote:Honestly, probably one of my favourites to watch lately. No, it wasn't the best quick, high speed manual that everyone tries for, but it was a fun track that had some awesome, well done, yet somewhat simplistic (except the rose) scenery. Great job guys.

What? Everyone tries for high speed manuals? You best be smokin' dat herb mayne.

Scenery was consistant, and it has a nice monument. I got a strong "Hillz" vibe from it.

'Twas an enjoable micro-scenery track.

Cereal wrote:

Traxis wrote:Honestly, probably one of my favourites to watch lately. No, it wasn't the best quick, high speed manual that everyone tries for, but it was a fun track that had some awesome, well done, yet somewhat simplistic (except the rose) scenery. Great job guys.

What? Everyone tries for high speed manuals? You best be smokin' dat herb mayne.

No, I mean that it seems every track is really fast manuals and quirks, it's never a nice calm track that has smooth flow to it. Yes I realize quirks have flow and stuff, but it's not majestic.

I really liked it ^^
The simple scenery looked really great, though when scening, I would avoid him riding inside objects like at 0:36.
The ending monument was really impressive! Fantastic job man

Thanks for all the feedback guys! and yeah Wolf, that looked bad

That reminded me of hillz by ZNF and mhenr18. That scenery was pretty cool and the track was nice as well, you guys did a pretty good job.

I liked it alot, however those lines that were on the inside of the lines representing the hills could have been a bit beater.

This was quite a nice scenery, I must say.......... what? Can't a ex-linerider judge on these days standards?

Traxis wrote:

Cereal wrote:

Traxis wrote:Honestly, probably one of my favourites to watch lately. No, it wasn't the best quick, high speed manual that everyone tries for, but it was a fun track that had some awesome, well done, yet somewhat simplistic (except the rose) scenery. Great job guys.

What? Everyone tries for high speed manuals? You best be smokin' dat herb mayne.

No, I mean that it seems every track is really fast manuals and quirks, it's never a nice calm track that has smooth flow to it. Yes I realize quirks have flow and stuff, but it's not majestic.

ahem.

I hope you won't mind if I use my system on here as well, to see how it handles your tracks

WishLine track rating system
Section 1 – Track Creation (2 Points out of a possible 5)

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Section 2 – Track Progression (6 Points out of a possible 10)

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Section 3 – Manuals (13 Points out of a possible 15)

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Section 4 – Quirks (2 Points out of a possible 20)

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Section 5 – Track Beginning and Ending (3 Points out of a possible 5)

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Section 6 – Scenery (11 Points out of a possible 25)

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Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (10 Points out of a possible 20)

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Scoring
Scened = 47/100
Naked = N/A/75
Final Score = 47%
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I think section 7 is right

The system is out of whack, if there is one fling, then quirk gets like a 3, thanks for the review but no thanks

ryderofthelines wrote:The system is out of whack, if there is one fling, then quirk gets like a 3, thanks for the review but no thanks

I've got some ideas on how to get this sorted. I rated bolted to the wall, one of my favourite tracks, and it only got 85% for not having enough quirk in it. I'll devise a better system soon!

Thanks for your patience

sorry for saying this again you already saw my last comment on it, thought you didn't but okay

Very cool, I really liked it. Great job with the main part of the flower thing, what ever they call it.

Wish, grade tracks on their type. Don't assume every track has manuals, quirk, and scenery. Have a quirk rating, normal manuals rating and scenes rating, or something similar

just because of wish's post I'm giving this review using my scenery criteria.

Ambitious? nope (though that's fine)
Epic factor/Impressive? nope
Complete/Cohesive? yes
Vision? somewhat. rose felt a little bit like an afterthought
An Experience? meh, maybe

Quality of art? rose was great, rest was meh
Creativity in scening things? could be better. except for the rose the track seemed rather bland/monotonous/formulaic
Speed manipulations? none
Detail? rose - good. rest - meh
Consistency? yes
Unified Theme? yes
Originality? ehh, not really
Speed? decent

Monument placement? good
Monument usage? fine
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)? a little bit of depth. not bad.
Made sense? mostly
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) none! (this is good)
Good Ending? yep

rabid squirrel wrote:

just because of wish's post I'm giving this review using my scenery criteria.

Ambitious? nope (though that's fine)
Epic factor/Impressive? nope
Complete/Cohesive? yes
Vision? somewhat. rose felt a little bit like an afterthought
An Experience? meh, maybe

Quality of art? rose was great, rest was meh
Creativity in scening things? could be better. except for the rose the track seemed rather bland/monotonous/formulaic
Speed manipulations? none
Detail? meh
Consistency? yes
Unified Theme? yes
Originality? ehh, not really
Speed? decent

Monument placement? good
Monument usage? fine
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)? a little bit of depth. not bad.
Made sense? mostly
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) none! (this is good)
Good Ending? yep

Rabid, I kind of get the feeling I've offended some sort of artistic sense in you by trying to do a rating system?

Why does this have so many posts o.O it was a simplistic scenery track of only thirty seconds

ryderofthelines wrote:Why does this have so many posts o.O it was a simplistic scenery track of only thirty seconds

It was just a track for me to mess around on.

Well, allow me to start of by saying that it was a fairly entertaining video to watch. The scenery was a little too repetitive for me, and I realize that a theme is important, but try to push the boundaries of the theme. The track was pretty good, although I'm personally not a big fan of head riding. The rose was very well done though, so kudos for that

As an overall rating I would say 6/10.