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Post by Wolf_Spirit on Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:17 pm

My fun track ^^
Why the green room? It has a little scenery in it :3
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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by WishLine on Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:31 pm

I seem to be a doing a lot of Wolf-Spirit rating this evening xD

Well, this is a classic example of what I call 'close quirk' - manuals and all sorts of gravity tricks in a track that fits in a small space. You did well with this one, definitely. Lots of bits of recycling in particular that I liked. I mean, I've just watched No One Dreams Anyway, so perhaps it's the wrong time because of what I'm comparing it to, but I still thought it was great! xD

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by [senpai] kevans on Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:42 pm

Not much I can say except that I like the semi compact and little recycles you had in it.

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by Cereal on Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:50 pm

I saw you steaming this; the recycling still looks gangsta. Those manuals were also really smoothly pressured, as well. :O

Monument was sort of out of place, but it was well drawn!

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by BoltKey on Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:00 pm

The track was good but have to agree with Cereal. I think it would look better if you added the scenery TO the track, not NEAR the track. Just saying what I think.


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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by Inukaza on Thu Mar 08, 2012 6:50 pm

That was VERY GOOD space recycling. With the lines you used, I was very surprised. Very nice job.

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by Stallie on Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:11 pm

I like that recycling and the flow was pretty good with the sync too. The track was all good as well, nice job wolfy.
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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by weebit on Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:18 pm

I loved the flow of the track. This was a great little track.
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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by hypothet on Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:35 pm

11/10 Great.

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by Xanth on Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:48 am

u recycled that bottom line like 5 times. dang.

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by Sssschiller on Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:21 am

That was a lot of recycling!! Also nice monument Wink

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Re: Que Sera - Wolf_Spirit

Post by katamariroller22 on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:02 pm

Well, this is the first track I've seen of yours! Yes... I've been gone a while... *sigh* But I must say I was very impressed, and it is quite clear that you're pretty damn good. There was some great track recycling, and obviously all the quirks were well done. I found it very entertaining, good job!

As an overall rating, I would day 7/10 <--- you tricked me about the scenery, otherwise it would be higher Suspicious

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