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Post by Chuggers Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:43 am

Maybe the voices in my head will shut up now




.sol here


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Post by Chuggers Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:45 am

Good job Chugs you really outdid yourself on this one


On a scale of 1 to 5 I have to give you Admin out of 5
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Post by Hedgehogs4Me Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:29 am

Sam Storm wrote:Good job Chugs you really outdid yourself on this one


On a scale of 1 to 5 I have to give you Admin out of 5
I really lol'd at this. I had to be quiet, though, because it's a quarter to five in the morning, so I made little squealing noises, and if anyone heard them they probably decided on the spot that I'm weird and don't deserve to be loved. Thanks. :|

I'm not going to give you a full review right now, but I just want to say that, although people will probably give you a lot of grief about how many vertical flanuals you did, I really like it, and, in fact, think you probably should've done more towards the end to keep it consistent. I'd also like to see more switching between them.
I'd also like to see this scened as gears and conveyer belts, as I've expressed several times on the stream. Too bad the stall is right in the middle of the track, though, so there couldn't be a giant clockwork robot monument at the end or anything like that. Maybe you have to extend the track. Hehe

But, yeah, very cool track. Smile
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Post by WishLine Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:56 am

Sam Storm wrote:Good job Chugs you really outdid yourself on this one


On a scale of 1 to 5 I have to give you Admin out of 5

Heehee xD.

Well, you were definitely going for something very deliberate with those vertical flanuals, that's certain, so there's no sense nor fairness in criticising you for it. I thought it made for a very enjoyable and aesthetically appealing track, actually, all that up and down. Looks like the workings of a lift (elevator) chamber. I was entertained by the movement.

Well done on this, I liked it!

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Post by SETH Sat Feb 25, 2012 9:28 am

pretty nice, i love new concept, et the vertical ride looks great, but maybe add more speed to the track, great job
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Post by RyderLR Sat Feb 25, 2012 10:37 am

Great job on the sticky walls, ood variation, the whips were great too, nice job. Maybe you should have put in some more spinners but overall good job :|
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Post by hypothet Sat Feb 25, 2012 10:58 am

Someone give this guy a hand. But not mine. I need it.

Loved it. There's a fine line between creativity and stupidity that defines a track. Sadly, no one let me in on this secret, so I'm just going to say that it's the track of the year, etc., etc., and that it makes me want to hug you.

Thank you for makin' dis bawss of a track, Sam.
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Post by Opal Rider Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:29 am

I gotta admit, I was expecting this to be longer. At the end it seemed like you almost gave up on making the pillars as large and amazing as the first few, and that made me sad, especially since that was the basis of the entire track. Other than those few thoughts, I did really like the track as a whole, and there was some nice flanual variation. Good job on this.
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Post by Cereal Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:38 am

I love it! Very creative concept, and you have some quality manuals thar. o_O

I'd imagine that this would be fun to scene...

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Post by Commandercoke Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:30 pm

Really neat. I agree with Hedge though. I wish there were more 'pillars' in the second half of the track. And the ones you did have in that half were less satisfying.
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Post by Orthuss Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:46 pm

You got me at "pillars". Immediate xD.

But seriously this was awesome. Those were some pretty damn smooth manuals and whips. Did slow down a tad at the end, but that didn't prevent me from enjoying it. Maybe you need more pillars, but, then again, that's basically the line rider equivalent of cowbell.
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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:54 pm

This was great. Brilliant and original concept executed effectively.

As a track, it lacks a little because it doesn't keep up the vision and degrades into normal manuquirk a bit - and the feels more lazy than intentional. But as a concept piece, it's very intriguing and captivating. Not a masterpiece, but a work of art for sure.

Normally I would say zoom in more, but I'm glad you zoomed out a lot for this one, because it emphasizes the height of the pillars.

Hope to see more creative stuff from you in the future Very Happy

...also, would you like a name change to Chuggers?
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Post by Chuggers Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:02 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:...also, would you like a name change to Chuggers?

Finally someone catches on Very Happy
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Post by Chui Ninji Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:24 pm

Sam Storm wrote:
rabid squirrel wrote:...also, would you like a name change to Chuggerzerboi?

Finally someone catches on Very Happy
Yes
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Post by Stallie Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:20 am

Sam Storm wrote:Good job Chugs you really out did yourself on this one. On a scale of 1 to 5 I have to give you Admin out of 5

Uh what?

Well, anyways that was pretty awesome chuggers. The veration and density of the track is good, and the variety of the tricks you did are pretty good as well. There was one thing I didn't like which was the music in beginning; it made the flow a bit out of place to the track. Over all you did a really good job.
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Post by rabid squirrel Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:05 am

Sam Storm wrote:
rabid squirrel wrote:...also, would you like a name change to Chuggers?

Finally someone catches on Very Happy
I'm not going to change it if you don't actually ask :|
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Post by Chuggers Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:25 am

rabid squirrel wrote:
Sam Storm wrote:
rabid squirrel wrote:...also, would you like a name change to Chuggers?

Finally someone catches on Very Happy
I'm not going to change it if you don't actually ask :|

Okay change it Very Happy
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Post by Pinter Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:49 am

I saw it a few times on the stream, and I said it was awesome.. Now, It's much more awesome ;D
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Post by efrazable Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:53 pm

Flanuals? WHAT IS THIS?!?
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Post by Georgio_jc Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:56 pm

Seriously, someone scene this! =D

Nice track Sam!
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Post by efrazable Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:52 pm

Chugs should post the .sol here so we can all try!
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Post by Hedgehogs4Me Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:26 pm

Maybe we should finish our current community scenery projects first, though. >_<
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Post by Chuggers Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:14 pm

Hedgehogs4Me wrote:Maybe we should finish our current community scenery projects first, though. >_<

This IS the new scenery project!


*maniacal laughter*

Also, .sol
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Post by Cereal Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:16 pm

Hedgehogs4Me wrote:Maybe we should finish our current community scenery projects first, though. >_<

yeeeeaaaahhhh.....

Get to work, y'all Smile
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Post by weebit Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:29 pm

Pinter wrote:I saw it a few times on the stream, and I said it was awesome.. Now, It's much more awesome ;D


yep it was awseome
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