Break the Silence - DLP

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Break the Silence - DLP

Post by dragonlineproductions on Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:28 pm


Here it is. The long shortly awaited track. It is a short one, this is mainly because I have trouble concentrating on things for long periods of time (blame Facebook for this). Hope you leik!

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Re: Break the Silence - DLP

Post by GhostY on Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:32 pm

i really loved the beginning, pretty awesome track Very Happy

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Post by efrazable on Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:56 pm

THAT WAS AMAZING!

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Post by Stallie on Tue Feb 21, 2012 11:00 pm

You have a lot of potential, but it was a pretty good track over all.

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Re: Break the Silence - DLP

Post by Opal Rider on Wed Feb 22, 2012 1:39 pm

I liked it. Very Happy Especially for being your first track on here, that was pretty bawss. There were a few places in the scenery where I couldn't really tell what something was, but as a whole it looked very good, and were those AGWs partway through the track? Shocked

Very nice.

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Re: Break the Silence - DLP

Post by WishLine on Wed Feb 22, 2012 1:56 pm

I'm really pleased to see a new person scening a track Very Happy Impressive and enjoyable first go! Please make more! Very Happy

You seem to have a good grasp of what scenery is all about, what looks good, how to shade it Smile

Now, if you were looking to develop your skills - and don't feel like you have to - you may want to zoom further in and draw smoother lines to make your curves more graceful. You might even want to try nose manuals Smile

Best of luck! I hope you're enjoying yourself!
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