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Post by WishLine Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:14 pm

A screengrab from my track as it stands. 40 seconds long. And containing brand new (well, to me) features and tricks! :O

WishLine's First LRing in Ages Wishli10

Yes, I know. It's stuck in 2007 somewhere! :P

Nevertheless, thanks for looking
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Post by Stallie Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:22 pm

Make your manuals more smoother and try experimenting a bit, other than that it looks good.
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Post by WishLine Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:25 pm

Cheers Smile - also, believe me, I am experimenting. Gravity wells are experimentation to me. I'm not even joking :P

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Post by Hedgehogs4Me Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:12 pm

...What if we screen shared over TeamViewer? :|
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Post by Opal Rider Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:25 pm

The best advice I can give you is try to stop it from going straight downwards, and work on smoothing out your manuals. Once you get those two things down everything else will fall into place.
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Post by Cereal Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:44 pm

Needs moar direction! (Other than right and down)
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Post by WishLine Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:57 am

A shoe.

WishLine's First LRing in Ages Shoe_l10

It's rough and imperfect, I'm doing my first pass over the scenery. I'll smarten it up (a little, not too much - it's meant to be doodle-like) on my second pass. Smile

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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Feb 17, 2012 3:13 pm

augh riding inside objects

/wrists
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Post by WishLine Fri Feb 17, 2012 3:14 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:augh riding inside objects

/wrists

Sorry to have offended your notions of good scening :P

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Post by Opal Rider Fri Feb 17, 2012 6:39 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:augh riding inside objects

/wrists
OBJECTION! He is riding on the floor around the shoe.
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Post by Hedgehogs4Me Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:24 pm

^ Then the floor needs more drawing-on. Wooden plank, carpet, or dirt texture please. :|
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