Wind Burst: Stallie and TCR

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Lucky.

But seriously, nice!

It was alright, you could easily tell who made what parts though. Nice as always tcr: Stallie, if you want my opinion on what you can work on, PM me.

It was mediocre.

TCR's parts were pretty awesome, though stallie, I felt your parts lacked the same speed and flow in which TCR had. That made it kinda inconsistent...

nice job though

how the heck did you get a collab with tcr

Anyways, it was a decent track, but I could easily tell who did what. Stallie, you gotta step up your game if you wanna finish first in the big dance

nice track! would be fun to scene

Stallie's parts were good, but TCR's parts seemed to overshadow them a bit.

It was a fairly enjoyable track overall, but I'd recommend collabing with people closer to your skill level.

I didn't enjoy the sudden changes in flow. I don't care if it's fast or slow, but it frequently oscillating in speed made it feel uneasy.

The transitions from manuals/gwells in flanuals were total flow killers IMO. Sudden stop then sudden go just didn't fit in.

However the manuals in there were extremely smooth. In my head I can visualize an acrylic ball rolling along a surface. What I "imagined" was that acrylic ball rolling along a giant marble track of pure smoothness made of polished marble.

6/10

I would agree perhaps there was a slight jerkiness, but I loved the two different riders' styles working together. Always something nice in a collab. Co-operative spirit or something.

Honestly, the whole track just seemed... awkward to me. Yes, the upside down kramual type thing was sweet, and yes, there were some cool tricks in there, but make up your mind, woman! Either give it a gentle-touch, sweet-smelling, wake-up-in-the-morning feel, or do something powerful and cool. Either one works, but pick one or the other, or if you're going to switch between them every 20 frames, at least make sure that's also what the music does.

Perhaps I'm just biased against tracks that have all those messy lines-
I mean, yes, it is in fact quirk, but with the proper degree of control that I've seen out of, say... aspi33 (lol you guys know who he is, right? I haven't done this line rider thing in like a year)... the tracks still appear aesthetically pleasing, even though there are doubled lines, and not everything is the same: everything rather, looks as if it has purpose.

My predilections aside... Hedge is right. Something feels awkward: you keep speeding up and slowing down by small bits, but there isn't really any flow to it: it lacks solid direction and purpose; you don't seem to sustain any particular theme for more than a second or two at a time, and there's always a fraction of a second too much airtime in my opinion. All in all though, probably better than what I am capable of.

We certainly hold people to a high standard round here, don't we?!

Also, seeing your sigs together, Absox and Hedge...which came first?

WishLine wrote:We certainly hold people to a high standard round here, don't we?!

Also, seeing your sigs together, Absox and Hedge...which came first?

Well. LR has evolved quite a bit from where it first began

I made mine first, then Hedge asked for one. So I made him one.
He came up with the retort himself.

efrazable wrote:Lucky.

But seriously, nice!

Thanks.

Rainbow Dash wrote:It was alright, you could easily tell who made what parts though. Nice as always tcr: Stallie, if you want my opinion on what you can work on, PM me.

Ok and thanks for the support.

CamQuartr wrote:It was mediocre.

TCR's parts were pretty awesome, though stallie, I felt your parts lacked the same speed and flow in which TCR had. That made it kinda inconsistent...

nice job though

I kind of felt the same way about some of my parts too. I was busy and stuff last month when we got in def with the collab, and I lost a bit of inspiration.

Sam Storm wrote:how the heck did you get a collab with tcr

Anyways, it was a decent track, but I could easily tell who did what. Stallie, you gotta step up your game if you wanna finish first in the big dance

I'm just good like that sam. Yeah I have been getting that said for some other people as well, thanks for the advice.

SETH wrote:nice track! would be fun to scene

Why thank you.

Cereal wrote:Stallie's parts were good, but TCR's parts seemed to overshadow them a bit.

It was a fairly enjoyable track overall, but I'd recommend collabing with people closer to your skill level.

Same thing I said to sam. I'll try finding someone at the same skill level as well.

kevansevans wrote:I didn't enjoy the sudden changes in flow. I don't care if it's fast or slow, but it frequently oscillating in speed made it feel uneasy.

The transitions from manuals/gwells in flanuals were total flow killers IMO. Sudden stop then sudden go just didn't fit in.

However the manuals in there were extremely smooth. In my head I can visualize an acrylic ball rolling along a surface. What I "imagined" was that acrylic ball rolling along a giant marble track of pure smoothness made of polished marble.

6/10

Well that's just you kevan, I'm glad you like the smooth manuals though.

WishLine wrote:I would agree perhaps there was a slight jerkiness, but I loved the two different riders' styles working together. Always something nice in a collab. Co-operative spirit or something.

Thanks, I'm glad you like the style change.

Hedgehogs4Me wrote:Honestly, the whole track just seemed... awkward to me. Yes, the upside down kramual type thing was sweet, and yes, there were some cool tricks in there, but make up your mind, woman! Either give it a gentle-touch, sweet-smelling, wake-up-in-the-morning feel, or do something powerful and cool. Either one works, but pick one or the other, or if you're going to switch between them every 20 frames, at least make sure that's also what the music does.

Well hedge that's just you like I told kevan. I'll choose one or the other next time, and thanks for the advice.

Absox wrote:Perhaps I'm just biased against tracks that have all those messy lines-
I mean, yes, it is in fact quirk, but with the proper degree of control that I've seen out of, say... aspi33 (lol you guys know who he is, right? I haven't done this line rider thing in like a year)... the tracks still appear aesthetically pleasing, even though there are doubled lines, and not everything is the same: everything rather, looks as if it has purpose.

My predilections aside... Hedge is right. Something feels awkward: you keep speeding up and slowing down by small bits, but there isn't really any flow to it: it lacks solid direction and purpose; you don't seem to sustain any particular theme for more than a second or two at a time, and there's always a fraction of a second too much airtime in my opinion. All in all though, probably better than what I am capable of.

Uh, ok, and well I guess, but that's the whole point when collabing. Why do the same thing as the other person, you should be able to do what you want in the collab, and to tell you the truth airtime is good.

WishLine wrote:We certainly hold people to a high standard round here, don't we?!

Also, seeing your sigs together, Absox and Hedge...which came first?

Yep, I was wondering the same thing.

Absox wrote:

WishLine wrote:We certainly hold people to a high standard round here, don't we?!

Also, seeing your sigs together, Absox and Hedge...which came first?

Well. LR has evolved quite a bit from where it first began

I made mine first, then Hedge asked for one. So I made him one.
He came up with the retort himself.

Ah, well that's nice.

I'm going to post what everyone else said. nice track.