opinions on this style - GhostY

https://i.imgur.com/fEPYd.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/1BISR.jpg here's a random crappy thing i drew, if you guys like it i'll go with that. its up to you guys

do you guys think this is kind of cool, or no? its my attempt at having kind of a story line as the track goes. its about an evil cloud invades a colony of good clouds and takes over but the clouds fight back and they work together to defeat it and such.

so should i keep this style? make the clouds more real? what should i add/change? :3

It all looks great ^^ I really like the cartoon-y style, the blocks at the right work well, all of it is good together except the black DNA thing (though it does look awesome)
Great to see you're scening again I'm not sure how you'll do this story-line idea, but best of luck with it bro

It looks very good ghosty, I like how the first one looks all cartoon like, it looks interesting.

Bit random, but it would look good if it had a common theme.

Pssch, common theme whatever. I like it just the way it is.

The first one is kind of cool. Just try to avoid using the generic abstract line rider style too much. It gets kind of old.

Also I like the idea of story telling through the scenery in a track.

I love this <3

CamQuartr wrote:I love this <3

SHUT UP, I DO WHAT I WANT

<3

I like it.

I like it.

Let chaos take control

Those clouds

are

ADORABLE

I once thought of making a high speed track that doesn't have any tricks, just a single line. It would be so fast, you could do frame by frame animation.

But what you are doing looks pretty schnaz!

^

Spoiler:

ipi also did one but he removed all his videos

also neato drawings there ghosty.

Sweet stuff, ghosts

Just one thing, though. If you're going to draw that kind of DNA in the midst of all that cloudiness, draw DNA everywhere and mix it with the clouds. That way, it won't look out of place. If you're not gonna do that, that DNA will look kinda very out of place and therefore bad. So just please don't fall into that trap

i don't think ghosty draws many things that actually go together (did you look at is?)

Orthuss wrote:Sweet stuff, ghosts

Just one thing, though. If you're going to draw that kind of DNA in the midst of all that cloudiness, draw DNA everywhere and mix it with the clouds. That way, it won't look out of place. If you're not gonna do that, that DNA will look kinda very out of place and therefore bad. So just please don't fall into that trap

ok i'll try that once i get back to that project, i kind of started a new one that i'm actually having some fun scening, and no its not random abstract its actually structured and makes sense

KillinTime2792 wrote:i don't think ghosty draws many things that actually go together (did you look at is?)

haha that made me lol

ok i started a solo track that makes sense and goes together, its going to mainly focus on old school themes and track style, except the track style might be slightly modernized :3

THIS is what I wanted to see from you for a long time! Something more on the basic side, even if it's abstract.

However, I think that seconds picture doesn't look like it would fit with the rest you just showed us.

Good luck with this, I'm really looking forward to it! =)