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Post by OTDE on Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:41 am

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Derpinator on Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:43 am

nice song Very Happy

i really liked the rotation xD and it was an awesome track general 8D

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Sheldon on Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:49 am

Style
9/10
You had so much great OTDE style in this track. Your curves a certain luck and feel to them, which is a good thing.
Control
8/10
You had pretty good control. A few manual curves looked rushed though. That pinch recycle looks like it took a lot of control.
Skill
8/10
You definitely showed more skill in this track then your previous ones. You had some more advanced flings and such.
Fun
10/10
Those rushed curves makes it look like you had fun making them. That animation was really fun, however I feel you could have edited it in a bet better.

Overall
8/10
I feel this is same old OTDE with a touch more technical skill. The animation was great, and the flow was good. I can wait to see the next in this song serious. Very Happy


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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Helios Pavonine on Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:48 am

0:54 FTW!

Music fit really well. You need to do some more speedier stuff Smile

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Cereal on Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:35 pm

It was great for the most part, but there were a couple sections where I could tell that you didn't really put as much effort into. Try to be more consistent. Wink

Animation was cool.

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Stallie on Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:48 pm

I like it, the manuals are smooth and your editing is very good. Thumbs Up
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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Opal Rider on Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:02 pm

LCC! owait. Great track, bro, You've really improved your quirk. It's sort of a messy manual style that really seems to flow well, and I'm really not sure how you make it work. Keep it up.

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by linerage on Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:09 pm

It seems really rough, but still entertaining.if you make something like this in a more refined version, it'll be even better (Y)

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by rabid squirrel on Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:38 am

That was great!

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by Wolf_Spirit on Fri Oct 14, 2011 5:02 pm

I loved the constant rotation in the track Very Happy
The animation was superb! A great addition ^^

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by shammies on Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:35 am

Oh linerider, what a great toy it was for me.
That was a really good track. I honestly don't know why I am commenting on this track, or even here in general.
Guess I just wanted to stroll down memory lane.
Anyways, great track! keep on bucking those apples.

sidenote: Rarity is best pony.

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by SETH on Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:32 am

i love the flow and the constant speed !

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Re: [OTDE]--Chorus

Post by efrazable on Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:04 am

@shammies wrote:Oh linerider, what a great toy it was for me.
That was a really good track. I honestly don't know why I am commenting on this track, or even here in general.
Guess I just wanted to stroll down memory lane.
Anyways, great track! keep on bucking those apples.

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