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Post by jlflame2000 Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:12 am


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4S2tXOGPKtI

Its about time.Thanks to Cam for recording!
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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:18 pm

It was extremely random, a bit sloppy, very short, and very small. It wasn't really an omni, it just changed style every couple minutes seconds. The scenery at the beginning wasn't bad but then you got lazy and didn't keep it consistent at all. Work on consistency and having a theme for the track instead of just drawing random stuff.


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Post by linerage Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:57 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:it just changed style every couple minutes.

Rabid has bad estimates for time. Hehe

Anyways, the scenery was fine, but it was kind of like those mediocre tracks you don't see on this website. I'm fine with that, because they didn't have a rule to make it as realistic as possible, and have platforms and stuff like that. The track was pretty good, I think you would've gotten more recognition if it was only your track. I've seen your videos before, and I can tell that your trackmaking is alot better than your scenery.


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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Jul 16, 2011 1:23 pm

I meant seconds lol. I thought seconds, I typed minutes. :facepalm:

don't listen to me lol I'm apparently not all here today
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Post by Stallie Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:44 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:I meant seconds lol. I thought seconds, I typed minutes. :facepalm:

don't listen to me lol I'm apparently not all here today

Someone needs a hug, rabid?

The track has a good flow and your skill level has improved, its a good track for being your frist scenery trackm nice job. Smile
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Post by linerage Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:57 pm

stallie wrote:
rabid squirrel wrote:I meant seconds lol. I thought seconds, I typed minutes. :facepalm:

don't listen to me lol I'm apparently not all here today

Someone needs a hug, rabid?

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Post by Derpinator Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:55 pm

Line rage, you got that from smosh xD

i thought the scenery was nice :3
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Post by linerage Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:56 pm

Rapto wrote:Line rage, you got that from smosh xD

i thought the scenery was nice :3

problem officer? :|
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