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Post by Jam Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:14 pm



Three months of hardly hard work resulted in this. I am pleased.

Comments and criticism is always welcome, but please be, even if slightly, constructive about negative points.

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Post by soccerskyman Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:24 pm

Well done. The music seemed a little fast paced for it. Other than that, pretty good.

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Post by CamQuartr Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:50 pm

Heres a few things I wrote down while watching...

-:11 amazing title
-:38 - :45 had awesome flow
-though the flatsledding at :47 kinda killed the flow (I usually like flatsledding, but I didn't think it worked there)
-Fling @ 1:00 was really strong
-1:24 was cleaver

really awesome track, definitively your best work. The Game Part II is gunna be awesome Very Happy

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Post by Jam Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:53 pm

soccerskyman wrote:Well done. The music seemed a little fast paced for it. Other than that, pretty good.
Thanks!

CamQuartr wrote:Heres a few things I wrote down while watching...

-:11 amazing title
-:38 - :45 had awesome flow
-though the flatsledding at :47 kinda killed the flow (I usually like flatsledding, but I didn't think it worked there)
-Fling @ 1:00 was really strong
-1:24 was cleaver

really awesome track, definitively your best work. The Game Part II is gunna be awesome Very Happy
Yeaaaah... I kinda regret throwing that flatsled curve in.
And... What? Not like we're gonna make a track called The Game II, or anything... *cough* SHHHHHH.
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Post by OTDE Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:49 pm

<3 Love the track, man.
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Post by Cereal Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:36 pm

OTDE forced you? That's not very nice, but at least it worked!

Like I said before, you honestly have some baller-status tail manuals. You make them look so natural. The track was also very directional!

The one thing that could use improvement was the air time. Don't use too much of it. Wink
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Post by OTDE Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:02 pm

Cereal wrote:OTDE forced you? That's not very nice, but at least it worked!

Like I said before, you honestly have some baller-status tail manuals. You make them look so natural. The track was also very directional!

The one thing that could use improvement was the air time. Don't use too much of it. Wink

Nope, I just kept bringing it up in conversations about line rider xD
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Post by Jam Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:04 pm

OffTheDeepEnd wrote:<3 Love the track, man.
Very glad you do!

Cereal wrote:OTDE forced you? That's not very nice, but at least it worked!

Like I said before, you honestly have some baller-status tail manuals. You make them look so natural. The track was also very directional!

The one thing that could use improvement was the air time. Don't use too much of it. Wink
Nah, he almost forced me.
And thank you very much.
And airtime... I hear that every time... I'm a terrible judge of airtime sufficience. :P
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Post by Stallie Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:13 am

That was very good, your manuals where smooth and your flings where pretty good for strength, nice job. Dopamine [Jam] 232659
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Post by Derpinator Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:24 am

This track is actually pretty perfect imo, the manuals were really smooth, same as flings and the editing was cool ;3
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Post by Jam Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:52 am

stallie wrote:That was very good, your manuals where smooth and your flings where pretty good for strength, nice job. Dopamine [Jam] 232659
Yay. Positive reviews! Thanks! =P

Rapto wrote:This track is actually pretty perfect imo, the manuals were really smooth, same as flings and the editing was cool ;3
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! =)
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Post by Orthuss Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:11 pm

So... smooth...
Awesome, one of the best manutracks I've seen in quite a while Smile
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Post by Jam Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:15 pm

Orthuss wrote:So... smooth...
Awesome, one of the best manutracks I've seen in quite a while Smile
Haha, I try... Thanks, man! =)
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