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"The Crimson" by Wizzer

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Post by Wizzy Sun May 15, 2011 8:57 pm

Dedicated to the victims of bullying
(There's a typo at the end T_T)
This track definitely feels, and IMO, is way different from my previous work. Hope you enjoy it.

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Post by InsaneDevan Sun May 15, 2011 9:04 pm

nice lines man
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Post by Cereal Sun May 15, 2011 9:06 pm

Wow, The track was mind-blowing! It was interesting how it had near-perfect flow, yet barely any airtime :O

This actually reminds me of your old style when you had a lot of g-rolls in your tracks.

I'll probably re-watch this a few in the near-future, +rep Thumbs Up
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Post by Stallie Sun May 15, 2011 9:07 pm

That was an awesome track wizzy142, the speed and flow was very good and nice opening statement about stoping, bullying. "The Crimson" by Wizzer 232659
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Post by Sheldon Sun May 15, 2011 9:23 pm

Very great track, With a good motive. Truly inspiring Sad
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Post by InsaneDevan Sun May 15, 2011 9:27 pm

InsaneDevan wrote:nice lines man
agreed 8D
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Post by AkidisPwnage Sun May 15, 2011 10:00 pm

what does linerider have to do with bullying?

so much more flow than my hair
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Post by Sheldon Sun May 15, 2011 10:01 pm

InsaneDevan wrote:
InsaneDevan wrote:nice lines man
agreed 8D
dude you agreed to yourself, I guess you are insane devin for a reason xD
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Post by CamQuartr Sun May 15, 2011 10:16 pm

that was... rather odd? I do say myself.

I'm not sure whether i hated it, or loved it. I felt the flings were kinda incomplete, too much back and forth which irritated me, but at the same time I loved it.

cool track though.

also lol @ InsaneDevan

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Post by linerage Sun May 15, 2011 10:33 pm

Cool track, wierd topic.
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Post by Votale Sun May 15, 2011 10:34 pm

I think you over-stated the "importance" of the track in the preview thread. All I got out of it was the pictures and the song kinda had something to do with it.. haha but not the "most changing track you've ever seen" or whatever you said in the preview.

Still a good track. I liked it Smile
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Post by Wizzy Sun May 15, 2011 10:54 pm

Votale wrote:I think you over-stated the "importance" of the track in the preview thread. All I got out of it was the pictures and the song kinda had something to do with it.. haha but not the "most changing track you've ever seen" or whatever you said in the preview.

Still a good track. I liked it Smile

I don't think you really understood what I meant. All I said was it was really emotional, that's all. I also made this to raise awareness. I wasn't aiming to change anything line rider wise.

Everyone always tells me how much they love tracks that convey emotion, so that's what I did. Love it, hate it, whatever it's your opinion.

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Post by Votale Sun May 15, 2011 11:00 pm

I'm just saying I didn't feel much emotion. Prolly because the song was too intense to make it feel emotional though the lyrics were meant to be.
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Post by efrazable Sun May 15, 2011 11:13 pm

I liekz teh silly riderz better. Pretty good, but don't make a habit of this.
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Post by Wizzy Sun May 15, 2011 11:57 pm

Votale wrote:I'm just saying I didn't feel much emotion. Prolly because the song was too intense to make it feel emotional though the lyrics were meant to be.

Really? I do everytime I hear this song xD I just want to "D:" then ":|" then after "Suspicious"

Edit: ^ Don't tell me what to do. kthnxbai.
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Post by InsaneDevan Mon May 16, 2011 4:15 am

The way u put those lines together brought a tear 2 my eye
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Post by Sssschiller Mon May 16, 2011 4:48 am

I liked the flow of the track. I'm not a big fan od rise against anymore but the song fit very well to the topic and the track. Great work, Wizzy!
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Mon May 16, 2011 7:56 am

Wow, I really like this track ^^
I've watched it a few times now and I've noticed that music was synced pretty well at some parts, was it intentional?
The track itself was pretty damn amazing, the flow was great and I loved your flings/g-rolls 8D
+rep Wizzer
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Post by Z_N-Freak Mon May 16, 2011 8:32 am

*Victem

Nice track wizzy and a nice message, though that's not something I'd search for in a Line Rider track it's a cool thing to do.
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Post by pure5152 Mon May 16, 2011 9:16 am

nice concept, great message, beautiful and unorthodox track. loved it!
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Post by SETH Mon May 16, 2011 11:36 am

Woww ! this is a very impressive track ! i love Smile , I love the fact that there havn't down rhythm into the track !!(sry for bad english i write quiclky)


great job !!
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Post by Steffo13 Mon May 16, 2011 11:57 am

Damn it'd have been awesome if you used The Approaching Curve as I guessed. Though this song is just as awesome. (On a side note: I WANT TO RS LIFE AGAAIN! DDDDDD: )

You're track was absolutely stunning. I freaking loved the beginning. A really nice way to start the flow of a track. This deserves to be featured IMO ^_^

LOVE Steffo

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Post by Georgio_jc Mon May 16, 2011 1:48 pm

[censored] the ones who are putting you down in here..seriously, what's the matter with you guys..

In my eyes this track was totally badass..crazy track man, I hope you'll do some more in the future! Very Happy
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Post by Helios Pavonine Mon May 16, 2011 2:47 pm

You made a track dedicated to bullying, and now we're sort of bullying you. Pretty ironic.

The track was very interesting. You managed to enjoy me without using a lot of airtime. Overall, a stylish track. I only don't get why you chose to dedicate this track to the victims of bullying and why it inspired you to make this LR track.
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Post by TheRevTastic Mon May 16, 2011 3:49 pm

One question, why did you use the black power fist for an image?
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