My First Granuals

No technically its not a 100 % naked track. I just didnt like the lines the granuals left.
Thanks to cereal, and some other guys who told me to some granuals and more tailies

I liked it, great for your first try at granuals, but one of yours didnt need the granual, the one in the middle. oh yeah, and wanna do a Colab together? it can be the newbie special!!! the second and third didnt need the granual, it looked like you just did it to keep the manual.

only the first one and the 'big one' are granuals. the other thick black lines are so it doesnt look stupid. haha yeah a colab would be sick. i just dont know how . (just noticed you joined on my birthday may 8)

Haha, the yeah theres a thread here for how to transfer tracks, and ill just email you it.
https://iridethelines.forumotion.com/t1766-the-complete-saved-lines-sol-file-tutorial?highlight=tutorial

oh, and happy birthday!

blink 182, sum 41 you like pop/punk rock music !

keep it up for your track

Great work with your first granuals ^^
Your manuals are definitley improving and I saw a few tail manuals in there too!
You really are taking on your advice well and improving every track
So, some things you could improve on/add:
You could add a stall at the end. This could simple be a box where Bosh stops in, or try to end him in a manual or something ^^
More tail manuals are great, you seem to be getting the hand of them quite well, and more is always better
Finally, quirks. You had a few small quirks in there, you used them quite well actually ^^ I'd reccomend using some 'flings' to speeden up parts. If you need help making them here's a useful tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPzvPFHwwEg
Good luck with your tracks and keep improving ^^
You don't need to follow my advice, just take little parts of it or improve by yourself ^^ Best of luck!