Sunshine

Here is my entry for the Battle that Gliss started. It needed to be bled and under a minute long.
Due to me being a fool and thinking the deadline was 19th of March while it actually was the 17th, I almost wasn't able to enter.
Luckily Gliss is teh awesome, so I could still join, but the ending is a bit rushed because of that and other reasons.
But who cares about that, just go watch mah track now



.sol: http://www.mediafire.com/?67ipznp3zkj37b3
(NOTE: I use Revision 6.6 in combination with Flashplayer 8 to make my Line Riders, using revision 6.1 and/or other flashplayers might result in the track not working)
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This is so not you so not your style.
But it pretty damn cool! I'm gonna have to get used to you doing alt rolls and asdfs. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest.

Thanks a lot wizzy. As I said on youtube to what looked like a troubled Votale; I'm not necessarily going to make my future tracks this hectic and fast and especially not the next one =)

I just wanted to try this stuff too for a little bit. Hedge explained how asdf's worked, so I had to try it out and damn they are crazy. The Alt-rolls and altflings in general I've done before, but the track with the rolls was never released and yeah, that kramual, I just had to put it in there, just to show that I can do one too, but for some reason I seem to be one of the few to find them hard =x (probably because I don't understand how it works at all).

Anyway, thanks for the comment ^^

i still dont know how to do an alt fling

good to see a entry from you though







im screwed

Yeah, gotta agree, the style doesn't suit you for what I know your tracks to be, but regardless, that was awesome!

Too much stacking, not enough manyools.

Edit: Why do these sols never work for me?

Hmmph... I think splash still gets my vote, even though it's really hard to decide I mean i really do like this track, with its almost every fling being an asdf...

Well, i suppose there was just a too repetitive amount of hand asdf and nose asdfs... You didn't really do much foot, shoulder, or any butt flings but yeah, powerful as hell can be

I'm gonna be honest.
I didn't like it. At all. The music didn't fit at all from 0:00 - 0:16 and 0:33 - 0:43. The track didn't change flow while the song totally changed its tempo and everything.
Then the trick variation was just terrible. Manualwise it consisted of almost only nose manuals and the "gravity" tricks I've seen were:
Hand asdfs
Nose-Spidey asdfs
Spidey flings
Nose alt flings
That's it. Oh and there was that ugly kramual.
I really hope you're not making more tracks like these Zeno. Retroceso is much better.

Totally agreed with Rafael. For me there weren't any interesting parts or ''wow-moments'' in this track. Good job for the contest though.

Very nice track znf Just so you know using a redline where bosh lands in a kramual makes it 10 times harder

Lol, I can't do a single trick in that track, except the manuals I guess

Impressive asdfs! I still have no clue how to do those. This isn't nearly as good as Retroceso, but I still think it's nice to see that you have learned many new modern tricks.

gl in the battle.

EDIT: Who are the aholes who disliked this video? Don't people realize that "dislike" on youtube really means that you "hate" the video?

^lol I still can't understand how you can dislike a 'normal' video. You'd have to be Justin Bieber or something like that to get dislikes..

However, way different to what you've been doing. I actually liked it, music was kind of...different as well haha. What was missing in my eyes was something really remarkable though.
Cool track dude, I'm looking forward to what you'll be doing

ok, the music didnt fit at all. i was impressed about the speed of this trakc, but the music destroyed it. some cool hardcore or metal would have been so nice i liked this small little flings like at 0:25.
and i dont like kramuals, they have no flow

Rafael wrote:I'm gonna be honest.
I didn't like it. At all. The music didn't fit at all from 0:00 - 0:16 and 0:33 - 0:43. The track didn't change flow while the song totally changed its tempo and everything.
Then the trick variation was just terrible. Manualwise it consisted of almost only nose manuals and the "gravity" tricks I've seen were:
Hand asdfs
Nose-Spidey asdfs
Spidey flings
Nose alt flings
That's it. Oh and there was that ugly kramual.
I really hope you're not making more tracks like these Zeno. Retroceso is much better.

He's just trying out new things, did you expect him to be aspi-good?
It bothers me when people say they hated someones track when they're just trying out new things. HE'S NOT GONNA BE AN INSTA-GOD AT ASDFS PEOPLE

Wizzy wrote:

Rafael wrote:I'm gonna be honest.
I didn't like it. At all. The music didn't fit at all from 0:00 - 0:16 and 0:33 - 0:43. The track didn't change flow while the song totally changed its tempo and everything.
Then the trick variation was just terrible. Manualwise it consisted of almost only nose manuals and the "gravity" tricks I've seen were:
Hand asdfs
Nose-Spidey asdfs
Spidey flings
Nose alt flings
That's it. Oh and there was that ugly kramual.
I really hope you're not making more tracks like these Zeno. Retroceso is much better.

He's just trying out new things, did you expect him to be aspi-good?
It bothers me when people say they hated someones track when they're just trying out new things. HE'S NOT GONNA BE AN INSTA-GOD AT ASDFS PEOPLE

The asdfs weren't bad. I just didn't like the track.

Rafael wrote:I'm gonna be honest.
I didn't like it. At all. The music didn't fit at all from 0:00 - 0:16 and 0:33 - 0:43. The track didn't change flow while the song totally changed its tempo and everything.
Then the trick variation was just terrible. Manualwise it consisted of almost only nose manuals and the "gravity" tricks I've seen were:
Hand asdfs
Nose-Spidey asdfs
Spidey flings
Nose alt flings
That's it. Oh and there was that ugly kramual.
I really hope you're not making more tracks like these Zeno. Retroceso is much better.

Said what I wanted to say, using the words I wanted to use.

Your more traditional style is much better.

^ I guess I must really suck then, cause I thought that was fantastic.

The music did not fit at all, though track wise the skills were amazing, the asadf flings were good and the manuals were speedy. very good MZNF

ACwazHere wrote:^ I guess I must really suck then, cause I thought that was fantastic.

IT IS FANTASTIC
I don't know why people don't like this stuff. It's almost no different from modern day tracks. 'Cept the music.

Wizzy wrote: It's almost no different from modern day tracks.

Yes. And that's not ZNF's best style at all. His traditional style tracks are much more fun to watch than his modern style ones.

I think what people are trying to say is "Chaotic Dynamix > Sunshine" lol

^ zactly

Why can't my tracks look that smooth and awesome

I liked it, it was.. smooth, as I said, but still with a quirky unsmooth touch

The music didn't fit though, IMO.

Wizzy wrote:It's almost no different from modern day tracks.

Exactly.

Rafael wrote:

Wizzy wrote:

It's almost no different from modern day tracks.

Exactly.[/quote]

.. So how does it suck? Or, in your words (because I know you'll 'correct' me) how is it bad? Literally every trick from modern day tracks were pretty much in this. Isn't that what line rider is all about afterall? Tricks?