Insanity: Epilogue [ Jam ]

Yeah. This is it.

Please do comment. Criticism is appreciated.
If you're gonna comment on the editing and/or recording, do it after a comment on the track.

Thanks guys, Jam out.

Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

No. Did you not read the text below the video?

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

No. Did you not read the text below the video?

I did, but you wouldnt like what i had to say, and it looks like you did

Lankher wrote:

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

No. Did you not read the text below the video?

I did, but you wouldnt like what i had to say, and it looks like you did

It's called keying the white off of Line Rider and using the background you used for the title for the rest of the video. Now please, your comment on the track?

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

No. Did you not read the text below the video?

I did, but you wouldnt like what i had to say, and it looks like you did

It's called keying the white off of Line Rider and using the background you used for the title for the rest of the video. Now please, your comment on the track?

Fine, it was sloppy, poorly executed and kind of nooby.
Weak flings, oddly shaped manuals and slow.


(good flow though)

Lankher wrote:

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:

Jam wrote:

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

No. Did you not read the text below the video?

I did, but you wouldnt like what i had to say, and it looks like you did

It's called keying the white off of Line Rider and using the background you used for the title for the rest of the video. Now please, your comment on the track?

Fine, it was sloppy, poorly executed and kind of nooby.
Weak flings, oddly shaped manuals and slow.


(good flow though)

*sigh* Whatever you say.

I like it - def best track you've done by far.

Curves were pretty good, and your flings have improved alot, but a little bit more of a trick variation could def help. There was also quite a bit of airtime, which if you included less of it, I think it would flow a whole lot better =D

Music sync was nicely done, and typography was also sweet.

CamQuartr wrote:I like it - def best track you've done by far.

Curves were pretty good, and your flings have improved alot, but a little bit more of a trick variation could def help. There was also quite a bit of airtime, which if you included less of it, I think it would flow a whole lot better =D

Music sync was nicely done, and typography was also sweet.

Thanks Cam. I will definitely try to have less airtime if I ever finish a track again (unlikely due to my extreme lazyniess). =)

Very nice track in my noob opinion, but Jakeos2 rules. I was gonna use the song branches by him for a track

Brandon971 wrote:Very nice track in my noob opinion, but Jakeos2 rules. I was gonna use the song branches by him for a track

Haha, thanks man. And yeah, he definitely rules... But Branches is a bit too short, no?

Jam wrote:

Brandon971 wrote:Very nice track in my noob opinion, but Jakeos2 rules. I was gonna use the song branches by him for a track

Haha, thanks man. And yeah, he definitely rules... But Branches is a bit too short, no?

Well my track was about a minute long, but I wanted to do the colored version too so I used The Immigrant Song

Jam wrote:(unlikely due to my extreme lazyniess). =)

you gotta be [censored]ing me

Lol nice, but what lankher said WAS what you did need to keep as a tip though. Other than those things, it was great ;o And yes, great flow.

linerage wrote:Lol nice, but what lankher said WAS what you did need to keep as a tip though. Other than those things, it was great ;o And yes, great flow.

Thanks for the feedback! =)

What's with all the flat sledding, bro? You've got such smooth manuals, why not show them off some more?

Abysmal Pea wrote:What's with all the flat sledding, bro? You've got such smooth manuals, why not show them off some more?

I don't know, I like flatsledding... =P

Here's the thing: Your tail manuals are really good, but your nose manuals need some work. (I don't know how that is possible o_O)

Try to get the pressure as even as possible, and try to avoid wobbles. Pressure is the key to smooth manuals, trust me.

Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable track.

EDIT: lucky! you got abysmal to comment on one of your tracks

Cereal wrote:Here's the thing: Your tail manuals are really good, but your nose manuals need some work. (I don't know how that is possible o_O)

Try to get the pressure as even as possible, and try to avoid wobbles. Pressure is the key to smooth manuals, trust me.

Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable track.

EDIT: lucky! you got abysmal to comment on one of your tracks

Haha, I guess I slack off on the easiest things. I will put more effort on them, promisse. =P


And yeah... And he commented on my excessive flatsledding. I was a bit surprised.

Jam wrote:

Cereal wrote:Here's the thing: Your tail manuals are really good, but your nose manuals need some work. (I don't know how that is possible o_O)

Try to get the pressure as even as possible, and try to avoid wobbles. Pressure is the key to smooth manuals, trust me.

Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable track.

EDIT: lucky! you got abysmal to comment on one of your tracks

Haha, I guess I slack off on the easiest things. I will put more effort on them, promisse. =P


And yeah... And he commented on my excessive flatsledding. I was a bit surprised.

Well then fix it.
No really, your tail manuals are very, very good, and I'm surprised you're not throwing them all over the place as a result. I did notice some wobbliness at the beginning but nose manuals generally get away with that more, since it doesn't show as much as a wobbly tail manual, and for the most part your nose manuals are good, just a few bad apples here and there.

Lankher wrote:Did you record this with a ... camera pointing towards your screen!?

its called "editing"

Abysmal Pea wrote:

Jam wrote:

Cereal wrote:Here's the thing: Your tail manuals are really good, but your nose manuals need some work. (I don't know how that is possible o_O)

Try to get the pressure as even as possible, and try to avoid wobbles. Pressure is the key to smooth manuals, trust me.

Overall, it was a pretty enjoyable track.

EDIT: lucky! you got abysmal to comment on one of your tracks

Haha, I guess I slack off on the easiest things. I will put more effort on them, promisse. =P


And yeah... And he commented on my excessive flatsledding. I was a bit surprised.

Well then fix it.
No really, your tail manuals are very, very good, and I'm surprised you're not throwing them all over the place as a result. I did notice some wobbliness at the beginning but nose manuals generally get away with that more, since it doesn't show as much as a wobbly tail manual, and for the most part your nose manuals are good, just a few bad apples here and there.

Wow, thank you very much! I will try not to allow the existance of those "few bad apples" next time.