My first track

Hey this is my first track check it out and tell me what you think
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vueYSuy0X74

Great track to be your first! ^^

You had some manuals here and there and some nice flips and loose head-manuals as well. And yes, I noticed that smooth manual at the end. Great job!

Oh, btw, try to zoom in next time. The zoom-level was at a far distance

Keep it up, bro!

Tips:

- Smoother manuals and prettier curves.
- More stronger manuals with the "correct" balance.
- More manual-pressure.
- More direction-changes. (you went straight to right all the way (almost))

Good luck on your second track

TigerLine7 wrote:Great track to be your first! ^^

You had some manuals here and there and some nice flips and loose head-manuals as well. And yes, I noticed that smooth manual at the end. Great job!

Oh, btw, try to zoom in next time. The zoom-level was at a far distance

Keep it up, bro!

Tips:

- Smoother manuals and prettier curves.
- More stronger manuals with the "correct" balance.
- More manual-pressure.
- More direction-changes. (you went straight to right all the way (almost))

Good luck on your second track

Thx for the tips got them from printer to XD, im already startet my new track but only at the start

Guitarman3d wrote:

TigerLine7 wrote:Great track to be your first! ^^

You had some manuals here and there and some nice flips and loose head-manuals as well. And yes, I noticed that smooth manual at the end. Great job!

Oh, btw, try to zoom in next time. The zoom-level was at a far distance

Keep it up, bro!

Tips:

- Smoother manuals and prettier curves.
- More stronger manuals with the "correct" balance.
- More manual-pressure.
- More direction-changes. (you went straight to right all the way (almost))

Good luck on your second track

Thx for the tips got them from printer to XD, im already startet my new track but only at the start

Nice! Good luck!

TigerLine7 wrote:

Guitarman3d wrote:

TigerLine7 wrote:Great track to be your first! ^^

You had some manuals here and there and some nice flips and loose head-manuals as well. And yes, I noticed that smooth manual at the end. Great job!

Oh, btw, try to zoom in next time. The zoom-level was at a far distance

Keep it up, bro!

Tips:

- Smoother manuals and prettier curves.
- More stronger manuals with the "correct" balance.
- More manual-pressure.
- More direction-changes. (you went straight to right all the way (almost))

Good luck on your second track

Thx for the tips got them from printer to XD, im already startet my new track but only at the start

Nice! Good luck!

thx:D

Your first track!? man, that's pretty good. Some hints: Half [I'm a potty mouth] manuals are'nt really good for style points.* Try to keep them at a minimum. The curves could be smoother too, which will help to keep him from falling into flatsled. Good job keep it up!




*Half [I'm a potty mouth] manuals are when he starts a manual then falls.

Nice first track.

Cool

Hey, we should do a collab together, seeing as we are both new! It would be really interesting and I think others would be impressed by the two newbies

Meh. I was in the middle of writing a dissertation for you, but Tiger covered pretty much everything I was going to say.

Pretty good for a first. I enjoyed that barrel rolling at the end. It was neat.

DegradedKing wrote:Hey, we should do a collab together, seeing as we are both new! It would be really interesting and I think others would be impressed by the two newbies

Yeah sure :rton:that would be cool

Chui Ninji wrote:Meh. I was in the middle of writing a dissertation for you, but Tiger covered pretty much everything I was going to say.

Pretty good for a first. I enjoyed that barrel rolling at the end. It was neat.

haha but tiger wasn't the first, i got alot of tips from printerfind to but thx