"The Love Knife" - Wizzy - Pneumatics Intro

So yaaa. This is a new series of all new stop 'n go quirk I'm creating. This is the intro, not the first official part to the series. Basically, I want to get a little feel for the style before I just jump into something like this. This is completely different from anything I'm used to, but I hope to improve on some things.

Music by Eminem (Feat. Rihana) - "Love The Way You Lie"



And ya, I know the tricks suck.

Woah, you're actually really good at stop 'n go! I enjoyed this track a lot tbh, and I think you should definetly make more like this.

What I liked most about it is the fact that there were many tricks that I am not used to seeing. Even if they are simple, I like to see change.

Also, wtf? Are you like, immune to copyright claims?

Reminded me of The River somehow. lol

GJ

I wouldn't consider this a stop n' go. Bosh only stopped completely 1-2 times throughout the entire track. Just sayin'

I liked it though, nonetheless.

Are you serious? @ the music. Not what I expected from you at all. It just pisses me off how eminem could have gone that mainstream when he actually used to be good. But that has nothing to do with this track. inb4 IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, MUTE IT. I love rap and hip hop, but none of that mainstream [I am a potty mouth] that 12 year old girls listen to.

Could use some more strength in your flings, and more effective stop n gos. I kind of felt this was lacking creativity and reminded me of mediocre 2008 quirk. I think it helps out alot to use music that syncs with the track for this kind of style as well.

And I'm sorry if you think this comment was harsh but I honestly couldn't find much that stood out. I am looking forward to seeing how this series goes though.

EDIT

Inukaza wrote:I wouldn't consider this a stop n' go. Bosh only stopped completely 1-2 times throughout the entire track. Just sayin'

I agree. It felt too consistent to be stop n go. It was more moderate-low speed fling/manu quirk.

^ I appreciate the criticism. Being foreign to this style, it really helps me to figure out where I should be going in the sense of direction. TBH, be as harsh as you can.

~boo wrote:Are you serious? @ the music. Not what I expected from you at all. It just pisses me off how eminem could have gone that mainstream when he actually used to be good. But that has nothing to do with this track. inb4 IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, MUTE IT. I love rap and hip hop, but none of that mainstream [I am a potty mouth] that 12 year old girls listen to.

I usually hate rap, and I usually hate mainstream music, and I usually hate swearing, but I like this song actually just saying

I really liked that. No it's not OMGWTFBBQ, but it's the first time I've seen a wizzy track in quite a while and though "oh wow, this is different" and then "I like it!"

maybe it's not technically stop'n'go, but it felt like it to me. Whatever it is I hope you keep doing more I hope you don't get discouraged by the criticism.

EDIT: reminds me of Uncertainty Principle quite a bit, actually. And that makes it win

~boo wrote:Could use some more strength in your flings, and more effective stop n gos. I kind of felt this was lacking creativity and reminded me of mediocre 2008 quirk. I think it helps out alot to use music that syncs with the track for this kind of style as well.

And I'm sorry if you think this comment was harsh but I honestly couldn't find much that stood out. I am looking forward to seeing how this series goes though.

EDIT

Inukaza wrote:I wouldn't consider this a stop n' go. Bosh only stopped completely 1-2 times throughout the entire track. Just sayin'

I agree. It felt too consistent to be stop n go. It was more moderate-low speed fling/manu quirk.

I agree with this. Your "stops" need to be much more dramatic, and your "goes" (yes, I looked it up, that's not just a verb conjugation, it's a legit plural) need to be much more powerful. That doesn't mean the track has to look like something out of aspi's playbook, but effective stops and goes are kinda essential to stop'n'go.

I really liked 1:02. That's something Votale or Leomur could do
Nice track Wizzy, good luck with your next stop'n go.

Stop saying "it sucks"!

That was pretty good! I loved it! Specially 1:02 ^^
Great music-choice, btw

(Since this track is a quirk, I'm not going to give you tips)

Cereal wrote:Also, wtf? Are you like, immune to copyright claims?

This is what I was thinking about the whole time tbh...like what the hell man? I'm not a fan of the music or anything, but I'm can imagine it's somewhat popular since it's by M&M(easier to type)

Oh, there was a track?

Guess I missed that.

~boo wrote:Are you serious? @ the music. Not what I expected from you at all. It just pisses me off how eminem could have gone that mainstream when he actually used to be good. But that has nothing to do with this track. inb4 IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, MUTE IT. I love rap and hip hop, but none of that mainstream [I am a potty mouth] that 12 year old girls listen to.

this man couldn't have said it any better.

alright don't hate me, but I didn't like it. It just didn't feel like you made this track. It sorta felt like ZNF was trying to make a track done by rabid (lolwut), It just didn't feel right.

the display of tricks were pretty good, the wells could be stronger, but eh.

nice work though

What did I do?

I actually like the song a bit, it's not thát bad anyway. And the track is fun to watch, can definitely be better and it's not really stop n' go yet, but you'll get there =)

Thanks for the Cnc dudes. Ya the track is pretty funky, it's my first time at this style

about the music, stay on topic dudes. I want to hear about the track and what sucks about it. I started part I today and I'm gonna try to work on those stalls.

i like the track, it was very enjoyable, most quirks i just tune out about a quarter of the way through, but for some reason i watched this one the whole way through.

Good Job