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Post by Trinity37185_Rim Wed Feb 02, 2011 2:04 pm

Here is my new one:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_0KJk4vbkI
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Post by linerage Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:21 pm

nice! i see alot of improvement <3
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Post by Opal Rider Thu Feb 03, 2011 12:41 am

I do see improvement, but here's some more things you can improve on. Try to make make the track a little less monodirectional. Also, longer tracks are usually better, in most people's oppinion. It just makes it more entertaining to watch. Aim for around thirty-five seconds at least.
But after all that, good job. Inverted Onoz
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Post by PrinterFind Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:50 am

sooo much nizzle 8D
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Post by TigerXLine Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:57 am

Nice! You're improving fast ^^

Tip:

- Keep training at those flings. You had a good one at 0:19.
- Faster and more expanding track. When you do it more compact, it gets boring in my eyes. Remember, you have no limits ^^
- A new track from you..... Smile

keep up the great work!
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Post by Trinity37185_Rim Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:03 pm

those flings? Which fling do you mean?
the 0:19 of the vid or of the Line Rider Track?

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Post by Opal Rider Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:00 pm

Normally, they mean the video. this time, I'm not so sure, because there isn't a fling at nineteen. While looking at the video, the fling is around 0:20 to 0:21.
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