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Post by Opal Rider Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:30 pm

Ok, most of this stuff that I write on here applies to ELR, but just treat it like a really good example of the tracks I make.
[url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PUEEJtrUpKc[url]
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Post by linerage Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:30 pm

Great manuals, love em ^.^

Least fav moment is 0:47, the gap after the flanual :|

most fav moment is 1:01, that switch made me go WTF
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Post by Opal Rider Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:37 pm

I love tricking people with those! xD They're so fun to make.
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Post by Cereal Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:41 pm

Ah, it's nice to see another track from a member I don't recognize. (Welcome to WRTL Smile )

Quick Protip: Try not to have an intro longer than 15 seconds unless it is really necessary

Anyways, it had some nice integration and manuals! The key to better manuals = more manual pressure. My favorite part of the track was that 2nd peg tail manual at the beginning. (those things are hard as hell, so props to you. xD)

Hope to see more from you in the future.
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Post by Opal Rider Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:44 pm

I always use second peg manuals. You'll see one in almost every one of my tracks.
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Post by linerage Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:24 pm

Yes @ cereal, but to be honest, peg manuals aren't all the time "entertaining", it's one of those tricks where it doesn't look THAT good, but is still very hard. It slows down the rider and isn't very stable either. I'm just saying, but this one was executed okay, so it's not like it's a bad thing. It's just my opinion.
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