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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:31 am



Not much to say, I guess.
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Post by Inukaza Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:41 am

You know you can't post your entry for laotw, right?

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Post by Cereal Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:41 am

You have rather.... interesting manuals. They are not very pressured, yet they are pretty fun to watch.

Aie was better imo, but both were vaguely enjoyable Wink. Also, <3 @ 1:48

Andrew wrote:You know you can't post your entry for laotw, right?

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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:54 am

The Hourglass was submitted for LAOTW #7.

https://iridethelines.forumotion.com/t2027-laotw-7-voting
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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:52 am

I liked the scenery, except it was uber detailed in clumps rather than consistent, and there was a large amount of riding inside objects in ale.

The manuals are getting better, but you need to spend more time on them to make them fluid. They look like you're struggling to balance them most of the time.
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Post by Rafael Sat Jan 08, 2011 12:11 pm

I really like that you're into highspeed so much! Keep doing that ^^
I'll review it later Wink
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Post by -Nexus- Sat Jan 08, 2011 12:37 pm

I also think taht Aie was better for the manuals/tail manuals...The sceneries are cool i liked the transition between the styles. it's a shame you didnt finish because it could have been awesome 8D
keep it up and (the most important) find motivation and inspiration. Just by imaginating things you could draw, you can create a new style or even by a simple theme as 'dark'(wich was my first inspiration for obsidian xd) or whatever that you think that would be nice if you developped it Smile
edit: I would also say: amaze yourself, this is what makes me continue to ride
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Post by linerage Sat Jan 08, 2011 2:24 pm

Meh, universe was my fav, because even tho sloppy, the transitions from flatsled into manuals are ingenious.
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Sat Jan 08, 2011 2:52 pm

Well, that was great ^^
Youu had some nice flings in there, some of your manuals were slightly unbalanced but others were prefect! Your scenery was in little clusters which as slightly annoying, but what you did looked good 8D However, you should try to avoid bosh riding inside of objects, like at 1:34
You also had some good speed in there!
Keep up all the good work HP, I hope you release a fully scened track sometime!
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:27 pm

Great tracks! A shame you didnt finnish them Sad

Meh, Inspiration comes and goes. Thats the bad part about it =/

Liked the music btw Wink
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