Universe and Aie - HP
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Rafael
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Cereal
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Re: Universe and Aie - HP
You have rather.... interesting manuals. They are not very pressured, yet they are pretty fun to watch.
Aie was better imo, but both were vaguely enjoyable . Also, <3 @ 1:48
Who gives a crap
Aie was better imo, but both were vaguely enjoyable . Also, <3 @ 1:48
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Who gives a crap
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
I liked the scenery, except it was uber detailed in clumps rather than consistent, and there was a large amount of riding inside objects in ale.
The manuals are getting better, but you need to spend more time on them to make them fluid. They look like you're struggling to balance them most of the time.
The manuals are getting better, but you need to spend more time on them to make them fluid. They look like you're struggling to balance them most of the time.
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
I really like that you're into highspeed so much! Keep doing that ^^
I'll review it later
I'll review it later
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
I also think taht Aie was better for the manuals/tail manuals...The sceneries are cool i liked the transition between the styles. it's a shame you didnt finish because it could have been awesome
keep it up and (the most important) find motivation and inspiration. Just by imaginating things you could draw, you can create a new style or even by a simple theme as 'dark'(wich was my first inspiration for obsidian xd) or whatever that you think that would be nice if you developped it
edit: I would also say: amaze yourself, this is what makes me continue to ride
keep it up and (the most important) find motivation and inspiration. Just by imaginating things you could draw, you can create a new style or even by a simple theme as 'dark'(wich was my first inspiration for obsidian xd) or whatever that you think that would be nice if you developped it
edit: I would also say: amaze yourself, this is what makes me continue to ride
-Nexus-- Member
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
Meh, universe was my fav, because even tho sloppy, the transitions from flatsled into manuals are ingenious.
linerage- Member
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
Well, that was great ^^
Youu had some nice flings in there, some of your manuals were slightly unbalanced but others were prefect! Your scenery was in little clusters which as slightly annoying, but what you did looked good However, you should try to avoid bosh riding inside of objects, like at 1:34
You also had some good speed in there!
Keep up all the good work HP, I hope you release a fully scened track sometime!
Youu had some nice flings in there, some of your manuals were slightly unbalanced but others were prefect! Your scenery was in little clusters which as slightly annoying, but what you did looked good However, you should try to avoid bosh riding inside of objects, like at 1:34
You also had some good speed in there!
Keep up all the good work HP, I hope you release a fully scened track sometime!
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Universe and Aie - HP
Great tracks! A shame you didnt finnish them
Meh, Inspiration comes and goes. Thats the bad part about it =/
Liked the music btw
Meh, Inspiration comes and goes. Thats the bad part about it =/
Liked the music btw
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
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