Technikal - Traviizter

by Traviizter Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:39 pm

HiDer! I joined last year ( Wink

) and decided to post my first track, so here it is:

Technikal - my first track. EDIT: Improved the quality of the recording; a LOT smoother now. Also used Windows Movie Maker instead of CamStudio to create the title slides, and I think it looks better.

Enjoy.. comment 'nd that. Smile

by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:49 pm

thats actually surprisingly good. but the part where you say stuff ish crap and it's your computers fault, it sounded like you were blaming the computer for not doing a better track xDD but ya i get what your saying, but its the recorder's fault.

by TigerXLine Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:59 pm

Its pretty good to be you first track. Like the music, too Wink

Some tips:

- Improve your recording (watch some tutorials on youtube Wink

)
- Smoother curves
- Have fun with experimenting and such. Always important to improve your ways Wink

Make more

Subscribing you*

by Traviizter Fri Dec 31, 2010 11:01 pm

linerage wrote:the part where you say stuff ish crap and it's your computers fault, it sounded like you were blaming the computer for not doing a better track xDD but ya i get what your saying, but its the recorder's fault.

Nah, I just made something using anything and posted it

Just my computer runs slow under recording, so the video is a little choppy. Plus I'm a novice at this whole thing Hehe

by rabid squirrel Sat Jan 01, 2011 1:22 am

^ I recommend aspi33's recording tutorial:
https://iridethelines.forumotion.com/t1915-how-to-record-your-line-rider-track-perfectly-aspi33

by JoaTrades Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:50 am

Pretty sweet first release. Very Happy

There is lots of critique I could give you but I would just recommend you keep refining your skillz. Pressure and flow are two things all beginners need to work on.

Also work on the recording. Wink

by Traviizter Sat Jan 01, 2011 3:11 am

Yes my recording sucks, I know. Camtasia/CamStudio/CamBlaBla is a bit choppy sometimes and an MSi U135DX with 1GB RAM isn't the fastest computer around Wink

by **Rafael** Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:21 am

Rank: Beginner track:
Curves: 3/5
Style: 5/5
Flow: 4/5
Flings in it: 6/10
Direction: 6/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Amount of tricks: 7/10
Constant speed: 9/15
Speed: 12/15
Manuals: 10/15
Total: 72/100
Criticism
Very nice track, it was surprisingly entertaining! I loved the placement of your rolls and stuff. It probably wasn't intentional, which is a good thing. You have potential! I I were you I'd work on your direction management, It mostly went rightwards and downwards, try to go every side, it'd make it all much more entertaining! Keep playing!