Arising to Downgrade - HP
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Arising to Downgrade - HP
Something went wrong with music. But anyway, I'm happy with the result.
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Arising to Downgrade - HP
i like the bled version betrar but at first i thought it was going to be a full lengthed track since you worked on it for so long nice still.
linerage- Member
Re: Arising to Downgrade - HP
Fun micro-track I guess, and that backwards shoulder pinch thing @ 0:19 was actually pretty cool o_O
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Arising to Downgrade - HP
Well I guess it's about gawd dayum time for me to start catching up on my reviews again.
First off I'd like to address to music because sadly I thought that was the best part. The bad quality almost made it better because it gave it a feeling of nostalgia and that song is one that give a person a nostalgic feeling even if they've never heard it. Still it probably would have been better if that first little section of the song hadn't been blocked out.
The track looked like a standard track a couple years ago. If you want a track for people to take seriously you'll need to work on trick variation and refinement. By refinement I mean improving the pressure and pull of your tracks but not sacrificing flow.
The flow was okay. Maybe the best aspect of this track.
The editing was pretty much basic. I would have preferred if you had bothered with making a full length track so we wouldn't have to finished listening to the song without anything to watch.
To sum it your track was pleasant but it needs to be a good bit more entertaining. Nice music though.
First off I'd like to address to music because sadly I thought that was the best part. The bad quality almost made it better because it gave it a feeling of nostalgia and that song is one that give a person a nostalgic feeling even if they've never heard it. Still it probably would have been better if that first little section of the song hadn't been blocked out.
The track looked like a standard track a couple years ago. If you want a track for people to take seriously you'll need to work on trick variation and refinement. By refinement I mean improving the pressure and pull of your tracks but not sacrificing flow.
The flow was okay. Maybe the best aspect of this track.
The editing was pretty much basic. I would have preferred if you had bothered with making a full length track so we wouldn't have to finished listening to the song without anything to watch.
To sum it your track was pleasant but it needs to be a good bit more entertaining. Nice music though.
JoaTrades- Member
Re: Arising to Downgrade - HP
^ You've perfectly explained my intention of my track.
It wasn't ment to be a full length track, just an ''introduction'' to my next tracks. I'm already working on a next track, and it will be much better with new tricks and better skills. I didn't care about skill, I only wanted to have fun.
My editing was intentional. I used WMM, which I shouldn't use anymore. However, I think the ''old movie'' effects were pretty good and fitted well with the music.
@ Cereal: Thanks! I didn't know it was that good.
It wasn't ment to be a full length track, just an ''introduction'' to my next tracks. I'm already working on a next track, and it will be much better with new tricks and better skills. I didn't care about skill, I only wanted to have fun.
My editing was intentional. I used WMM, which I shouldn't use anymore. However, I think the ''old movie'' effects were pretty good and fitted well with the music.
@ Cereal: Thanks! I didn't know it was that good.
Helios Pavonine- Member
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