Obsidian

Yup. I actually come from lr.fr and I just wanted to show what I did for the LRA2010, like SETH and Moizut. The decoration in itself isn't done yet because I hadn't enough time to finish it before the nominations of the awards But the essential is there...just...the gigantique momunent that is still not drew.... And I've already began the continuation of the naked track for a second part Yep, I've a lot of work to do.. Ok enough talking about myself, just enjoy (;


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwUi2-aQBOI

Are there also French trackmakers? O_O

Oh. Were we hided too much? Well if you go see SHINDAI and Dashing Skyline (Moizut and SETH) right under me in the Green Room thread, you'll be seeing two other french guys coming from linerider.fr.
Oh and it's in the video but, this is my first video and I had never did editting before this one so...well...nothing.

No, I mean every French guy coming here releases a scenery track
Anyway, let me give you some criticism.
The first thing that bugged me was the text. It was very hard to read. Watch that next time
As for the track, it was like... You mixed really abstract stuff with a landscape theme, and I thought it was kinda awkward. The scenery itself was nice though

OK thank you, actually I wasn't sure if you were joking or whatever

I enjoyed watching this track very much, it must have taken a very long time to draw all the black and the straight lines precisley ^^ I really do love abstract scenery very much, yours was very good, you filled most of the space most of the time which was good. My favourite part was probably the cross-hatching, it looked impressive, however it seemed out of place with the rest of the scenery. It's a shame as it looked very good. Overall I enjoyed watching it and you have some good scenery skills, keep making scenery

TBH it was very bland in some areas and there wasn't much scenery variation. There were only 2 styles and that was it >_<
But I think this is an old track I assume right? So I won't say it was too bad.

Finish it

I liked it but it was bland the cross-hatching didn't fit in but other than that it looked quiet good

I enjoyed your scenery, bud I like the style.

Your track was slow and got boring. Meh, that just me

Love to see more of that style

+ rep

The track was really slow, which made it boring to watch, but the scenery was pretty cool. I liked the squares. Keep in mind though that ingenuity (creativity) makes a track, not a large amount of shading

I liked the shading on the first frame mountains
The bad thing was the track. As almost everyone has said, it was slow.
But w/e, it was your first work, which is awesome!

~rawr wrote:Finish it

I liked it but it was bland the cross-hatching didn't fit in but other than that it looked quiet good

In fact, I won't finish it ;p
I already began to scene the second part (wich I called Monstrous) and it's really addicting for me to draw these enormous monuments as it's the first time that I do something like this. The name of the rack is also revealating in two ways as it'll be one of those tracks that contains gigantics draws and as there'll be somekind of monster but I won't tell you wich kind :p