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Lost Control - HP

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Post by Helios Pavonine Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:03 pm

I'm already releasing it on Imageshack, going to upload it to YouTube with sound soon. A partly offsled manuquirk track. I present my first track, Lost Control. Enjoy!

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4282/lineriderlostcontrol.mp4
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Post by Polarix Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:02 am

LOL, Try keeping Bosh on his sled next track.

And yes i know what the title means now Lost Control - HP 92494
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Post by CamQuartr Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:19 am

lolwut at it going offsled.

it was okay i guess, random at times

not tooo bad for first track

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Post by Rafael Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:25 am

Nice track. But the sled was broken when Bosh went offsled =/
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:48 am

Whenever I open the link my internet dies. I've tried opening in the last few days...youtube link please?
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Post by Purtle Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:41 pm

Where was the music?

Anyways, I was thinking the same as rafael. Usually you try and keep the sled from breaking. It was just sort of random and meh.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:54 pm

Randomness is my style. You'll have to live with it.

I'm working on my next track, totally offsled now. The series is totally offsled and will probably contain about 5 tracks, all offsled (except for LC, it's partly manuquirk) and even has a story which I will add to my videos later. I'll submit LC Wednesday when I'm free of school at the after-noon.
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Post by linerider_dude321 Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:43 am

Best track I have ever seen.
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Post by Absox Tue Jun 22, 2010 2:11 pm

Meh. I feel for the onsled part, you coulda kept the flow better on the gwells and stuff. Ideally they shouldn't jerk bosh around on the sled, but he should go smoothly from one to the next.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:52 am

I might cancel the series because I'm really excited to scene a track. And as you can see I'm not that good at offsled. Lost Control - HP Icon_neutral
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