Party Crasher - Pure5152
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Party Crasher - Pure5152
main inspirations: painlobster and RovanO
didn't focus on tricks or skill. This track is 100% style
anyways, hope you enjoy!
check the youtube link for the full description ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4ck2dPELcc
didn't focus on tricks or skill. This track is 100% style
anyways, hope you enjoy!
check the youtube link for the full description ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4ck2dPELcc
pure5152- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
I don't know how RovanO inspired you, because that's WAY too quirky to be RovanO's style . I did recognize PL though.
Anyway the track was good. Here are some tips though:
- Try to add more airtime, this makes the viewer excited about what's next to come.
- Try to make clearer you stopped at the stop n gos. It went by too fast to notice he stopped, and not just see he stopped, if you know what I mean. Keep Bosh in the stopping position a bit longer.
Keep improving ^^
Anyway the track was good. Here are some tips though:
- Try to add more airtime, this makes the viewer excited about what's next to come.
- Try to make clearer you stopped at the stop n gos. It went by too fast to notice he stopped, and not just see he stopped, if you know what I mean. Keep Bosh in the stopping position a bit longer.
Keep improving ^^
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
Copy + Paste from u2b
Holy Bosh
Epic track and the song fitted so well, but it used
I guess it wouldn't matter about the song
P.S that i saw that HBH fling @ 1:00
Holy Bosh
Epic track and the song fitted so well, but it used
I guess it wouldn't matter about the song
P.S that i saw that HBH fling @ 1:00
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
It looks like all your tracks are the same, yet entertaining. Your style is unique and doesn't need any improvements. God bless you for being my favourite rider. Will subscribe if I'm able to login into YouTube.
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
Stop 'n' Go = Best Style ever!
I loved this so much, it was entertaining, fun and complex at the same time. I don't know why I love Stop 'n' Go so much but I do, well it started off as stop 'n' go then went insane So +rep to you and I realised I haven't subbed to you *subscribes*
I loved this so much, it was entertaining, fun and complex at the same time. I don't know why I love Stop 'n' Go so much but I do, well it started off as stop 'n' go then went insane So +rep to you and I realised I haven't subbed to you *subscribes*
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
RovanO-like music, but definetly his style of track
Great job as always, I don't know how you do it, but you're tracks never have any boring parts.
Great job as always, I don't know how you do it, but you're tracks never have any boring parts.
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
are you kidding? votale's fifty times better than me :|
thanks for all the comments guys!
thanks for all the comments guys!
pure5152- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
Well there really isn't a way to find out who is better when people have completely different styles, plus you could be better than me at one and I could be better at another. I think you are LCC worthy, and better than me though
Votale- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
Votale wrote:Well there really isn't a way to find out who is better when people have completely different styles, plus you could be better than me at one and I could be better at another. I think you are LCC worthy, and better than me though
This
crash2burn- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
Well that was fancy schmancy .
There was so much going on it was hard to keep up, i don't know how you guys do it nowadays.
It kept my attention because i was like "WTF is going on *tries to follow LR*"
There was so much going on it was hard to keep up, i don't know how you guys do it nowadays.
It kept my attention because i was like "WTF is going on *tries to follow LR*"
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
That was, rather incredible.
all im going to say, is that was a 10 star, there was nothing you did wrong.
all im going to say, is that was a 10 star, there was nothing you did wrong.
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
OH f***.
you really perfected this power-quirk style imo.
and
i feel pwned
we just have to collab when i get my computer back.
^
you really perfected this power-quirk style imo.
and
i feel pwned
we just have to collab when i get my computer back.
^
Lukking- Member
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Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
yeah I don't think so either :
it'd be like that collab lukking and redcap did..
it'd be like that collab lukking and redcap did..
pure5152- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
I should be inspired by you
Nice job. I love how you throw bosh through a smorgeporge of crap and never give any indication of what fling he'll hit next. The unpredictability of this particular track (along with many of your other ones) really defines your style as something unique.
And yeah, smorgeporge .
Nice job. I love how you throw bosh through a smorgeporge of crap and never give any indication of what fling he'll hit next. The unpredictability of this particular track (along with many of your other ones) really defines your style as something unique.
And yeah, smorgeporge .
Painlobster- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
me for LCC?
geez.. are you guys out of your mind or something? :
geez.. are you guys out of your mind or something? :
pure5152- Member
Re: Party Crasher - Pure5152
This track is basically like The River, except about twice as entertaining and not quite as intense. I liked it, but I'm noticing your tracks are getting more and more tightly wound.
In my opinion (and this is coming from someone who can't make a shoulder fling) you would do well to experiment around with airtime and pauses in the flow. Not just stops that happen in 5 frames, but half a second flow-change moments where he slows down. And show that you can sustain something rather than just throwing a bunch of split-second tricks at us - try making something that lasts for a second or two.
In other words, watch anomaly's tracks
But yeah, this was fun, keep up the awesome work!
In my opinion (and this is coming from someone who can't make a shoulder fling) you would do well to experiment around with airtime and pauses in the flow. Not just stops that happen in 5 frames, but half a second flow-change moments where he slows down. And show that you can sustain something rather than just throwing a bunch of split-second tricks at us - try making something that lasts for a second or two.
In other words, watch anomaly's tracks
But yeah, this was fun, keep up the awesome work!
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