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Party Crasher - Pure5152

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Post by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:52 am

main inspirations: painlobster and RovanO

didn't focus on tricks or skill. This track is 100% style Smile

anyways, hope you enjoy!

check the youtube link for the full description ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4ck2dPELcc
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Post by Rafael Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:26 am

I don't know how RovanO inspired you, because that's WAY too quirky to be RovanO's style xD. I did recognize PL though.

Anyway the track was good. Here are some tips though:
- Try to add more airtime, this makes the viewer excited about what's next to come.
- Try to make clearer you stopped at the stop n gos. It went by too fast to notice he stopped, and not just see he stopped, if you know what I mean. Keep Bosh in the stopping position a bit longer.

Keep improving ^^
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Post by The Cold Rider Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:03 am

Copy + Paste from u2b
Holy Bosh Eep
Epic track and the song fitted so well, but it used D:
I guess it wouldn't matter about the song xD


P.S that i saw that HBH fling @ 1:00 8D

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Post by Helios Pavonine Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:11 am

It looks like all your tracks are the same, yet entertaining. Your style is unique and doesn't need any improvements. God bless you for being my favourite rider. Will subscribe if I'm able to login into YouTube. Party Crasher - Pure5152 623181
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:51 am

Stop 'n' Go = Best Style ever!
I loved this so much, it was entertaining, fun and complex at the same time. I don't know why I love Stop 'n' Go so much but I do, well it started off as stop 'n' go then went insane xD So +rep to you and I realised I haven't subbed to you D: *subscribes*
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Post by Cereal Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:21 am

RovanO-like music, but definetly his style of track xD

Great job as always, I don't know how you do it, but you're tracks never have any boring parts. Wink
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Post by Votale Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:18 pm

What a coincidence. The end of the link says LCC Very Happy
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Post by crash2burn Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:20 pm

^pure for LCC!

Because he's better than Votale! :|
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Post by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:52 pm

are you kidding? votale's fifty times better than me :|

thanks for all the comments guys!
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Post by Votale Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:55 pm

Well there really isn't a way to find out who is better when people have completely different styles, plus you could be better than me at one and I could be better at another. I think you are LCC worthy, and better than me though :P
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Post by crash2burn Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:09 pm

Votale wrote:Well there really isn't a way to find out who is better when people have completely different styles, plus you could be better than me at one and I could be better at another. I think you are LCC worthy, and better than me though :P

This :|
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Post by Purtle Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:26 pm

Well that was fancy schmancy xD.

There was so much going on it was hard to keep up, i don't know how you guys do it nowadays.

It kept my attention because i was like "WTF is going on *tries to follow LR*"
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Post by CamQuartr Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:10 pm

That was, rather incredible.

all im going to say, is that was a 10 star, there was nothing you did wrong.

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Post by Lukking Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:11 pm

OH f***.
you really perfected this power-quirk style imo.
and
i feel pwned :|
we just have to collab when i get my computer back.
^:|
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Post by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:20 pm

D: I can't collab with you lukking.. you're too good..
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Post by crash2burn Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:39 pm

Then collab with me

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Post by Votale Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:53 pm

I don't think Lukking's speed would mix with Pure's style :P
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Post by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:03 pm

yeah I don't think so either :

it'd be like that collab lukking and redcap did..
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Post by Lukking Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:57 pm

yea kinda...
anyway, pure for lcc !
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Post by Painlobster Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:16 pm

I should be inspired by you Party Crasher - Pure5152 581354
Nice job. I love how you throw bosh through a smorgeporge of crap and never give any indication of what fling he'll hit next. The unpredictability of this particular track (along with many of your other ones) really defines your style as something unique.
And yeah, smorgeporge Party Crasher - Pure5152 581354 .
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Post by pure5152 Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:11 pm

me for LCC?

geez.. are you guys out of your mind or something? :
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Post by rabid squirrel Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:45 pm

This track is basically like The River, except about twice as entertaining and not quite as intense. I liked it, but I'm noticing your tracks are getting more and more tightly wound.

In my opinion (and this is coming from someone who can't make a shoulder fling) you would do well to experiment around with airtime and pauses in the flow. Not just stops that happen in 5 frames, but half a second flow-change moments where he slows down. And show that you can sustain something rather than just throwing a bunch of split-second tricks at us - try making something that lasts for a second or two.

In other words, watch anomaly's tracks xD

But yeah, this was fun, keep up the awesome work!
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