sad

Sorry people I couldnt upload the 2nd vid for this series. watch it at my youtube channel. its called LR adventure II or sumptin like that. sry about face

love it man, very creative and original.

This is a perfect example of better scenery and track doesn't always make better watching enjoyment!

good, but as with the last track, try to include some manuals

Pretty nice! You're improving

Next time, try to make an actual name for the track (and series ),
you can also always put in some music using Windows Movie Maker.

If you have any questions you can always PM me

As for the track, try not to go the same direction all the time,
you need to go up, down, left, right. It makes track more entertaining
to watch and it looks alot better!

Woha, I agree 100% with Cereal. That was suprisingly enjoyable.

Good job! Keep riding

OMG (i thought this day would never happen! ) LRG thanks! (i would never think of one of my favorite LR makers to comment like that!) ok sry I freaked out.

Rafael wrote:Pretty nice! You're improving

Next time, try to make an actual name for the track (and series ),
you can also always put in some music using Windows Movie Maker.

If you have any questions you can always PM me

As for the track, try not to go the same direction all the time,
you need to go up, down, left, right. It makes track more entertaining
to watch and it looks alot better!

I did put a name its called "line rider adventure" and this will be a series.

Nubcake wrote:good, but as with the last track, try to include some manuals

kthx but i cant do manuals that well can u help?

fludd, try to edit your post when you want to reply to more than one comment

There's a edit button at the right-top of your post

it was okay. I like to be srs and not overly positive

try to make more detail, like shading, and ... more. like at some points you could just see the track lines, which you don't want. You want there to be a constant flow of scenery. With this track, I got the feeling that it was a factory-ish theme, so maybe you could put presses or machines in the background. Also, make your lines on your rocks thinker, it makes things stand out more, and look bolder.

well would ya look at that... It actually looks like line rider .-.

This is a perfect example of better scenery and track doesn't always make better watching enjoyment!

Your sentence makes it sound like his track sucked :/

there was no music but it was short enough and interesting enough that everyone will watch the whole thing, perhaps it's a different way of looking at it.

youtube issues... cant see the video right now, ill watch it l8r.

I thought it was nice. Great job. Just some more detail. Watch some tutorials on youtube

This post is epic. LOL

Anyway... I tried to do manuals, BUT the site refreshed alot for ads, so the thing went corrupted.

haha double post spamming your own thread!!!

i saw the video and it was alright. you can improve, just keep trying.

dont double post just to bump your own thread

Watch this: https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=line+rider+manual+tutorial&search_type=&aq=0&oq=line+rider+manual+tutorial


Very interesting i gotta say!
Nowadays i dont even watch whole up-to-date tracks because they bore me.
This was awesomely creative.

Work on shading, and try make more of your awesome scenery in your track