Dirt

Yes, it's called dirt . I made a track and did whatever.

I really liked that recycled nose manual at the beginning. Thought it looked cool and I wasn't expecting it.

Flow wise, I think this might've been your best track so far. You played around a lot with tumble lines on an x manual, which brings me a lot of nostalgia for a lot of my old tracks. And while trying out the dot idea from interrobang isn't terrible, and I fully understand this is a do whatever track, intention is everything when it comes to green line tricks. They need purpose, be that completing a shape that you made with a manual, or giving the audience something coherent to look at. The smaller, intermittent sections of green didnt quite fit that budget.

Hope this critique gives you ideas for your next track.

Opal Rider wrote:Flow wise, I think this might've been your best track so far. You played around a lot with tumble lines on an x manual, which brings me a lot of nostalgia for a lot of my old tracks. And while trying out the dot idea from interrobang isn't terrible, and I fully understand this is a do whatever track, intention is everything when it comes to green line tricks. They need purpose, be that completing a shape that you made with a manual, or giving the audience something coherent to look at. The smaller, intermittent sections of green didnt quite fit that budget.

Hope this critique gives you ideas for your next track.  

Really? I thoght this was the least best.

Non-quote part: This was just a strange experiment to me guys, im not that great with contact juggling.The part i enjoyed doing is the huge 180° line.
thanks guys

Contact juggling is meant to complement his motion, not force out pretty designs and patterns. I thought I'd point this out, because that's exactly what you did. The designs will happen as a result of the complementary motion.