The Desolation Of Smoog - Episode 1 - WizWoz

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Post by Wizzy on Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:19 pm

I have made another thingy.

This was started in late 2014 around November/December. I think it pretty much speaks for itself. Basically it is a homage to older tracks, while at the same time it's kind of it's own thing. You'll see references to older tracks from back in the day as well as new stuff, some little animations here and there as well as cut scenes. There is a plot and even a beginning of a character arc (for Bosh himeslf) and it's basically just a fun time. So yeah!

If you want to skip to where the actual thingy starts, skip to 1:50. You should be golden.
Also, I am working on another thingy currently (completely unrelated) so it'll probably be a while before I get to finishing this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0zdUlg1YWlM&feature=youtu.be

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Post by OTDE on Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:38 pm

Wow! I really enjoyed that. I feel like some of the music placement could have been better in spots, but it didn't detract too much from the experience :P

Good stuff!

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Post by Opal Rider on Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:53 pm

I missed tracks with a story so much! And it's great, because this one didn't rely on boring WMM themes to move the plot along. Using the editing process made it a lot more entertaining to watch.

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Post by gaoyubao on Sun Jun 28, 2015 10:26 pm

Ahh can't wait to see whatever happens to the thingy with watts!

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Post by theacp127 on Sun Jun 28, 2015 11:43 pm

That was awesome and hilarious. I look forward to episode 2.

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Post by Lukking on Mon Jun 29, 2015 1:25 am

Turned out to be alot more awesome than i initially thought! Great job

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Post by Z_N-Freak on Mon Jun 29, 2015 2:41 am

I wasn't expecting this type of story at all and got pleasantly surprised. It was fun to watch although I'd say the flat-sled beginning without story was maybe a little on the long side. I continued to watch it, because you mentioned there would be some kind of animation after which I got pulled in by the story line Smile

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Post by Getthim on Mon Jun 29, 2015 3:55 am

that was awesome, and something not seen in a long time, if you would like help with this, give me a shout eh, good luck, looking forwards to what happens next

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Post by Conundrumer on Mon Jun 29, 2015 9:17 pm

yes finally narratives
this was really enjoyable to watch
looking forward to episode 2

We could debate about what is a track, but I think this is very much in the spirit of Line Rider, the whimsy doodles-in-margin-of-paper kind of thing.

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Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:58 am

This deserves to go viral

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Post by Sheldon on Tue Jun 30, 2015 4:44 am

dude that was great i loved the 'animation' style very easy to follow
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Post by Rafael on Tue Jun 30, 2015 5:04 am

Track of the year

This track had me smiling pretty much all the way through. Dude, this is awesome!

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Post by Yobanjojoe on Tue Jun 30, 2015 9:45 am

I love these things, they never fail to entertain me

The animation was really cool

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Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:45 pm

Honestly, as much work as quirk takes, it doesn't give the same reward as this kind of use of LR. Quirk is impressive. Animation is visually stunning. But storytelling is the height of entertainment in LR. You nailed it, editing and otherwise.

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Post by Snooze on Sun Jul 05, 2015 5:19 am

My comment on youtube

Damn it that's good. I may have tracks with dense scenery and like 70k views but something about this is better. I couldn't make something like this. For example, the rocks are simple but well scaled and natural looking. The other unusual elements are also charming. You've got your own thing and I hope we see it grow!

Edit: Dude, is this Wizzy under a new name and new youtube account? :facepalm:

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Post by Wizzy on Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:15 am

@Snooze wrote:
Edit: Dude, is this Wizzy under a new name and new youtube account? :facepalm:

Don't worry about it :|

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Post by efrazable on Wed Oct 14, 2015 8:23 pm

Bump because this didn't get too much feedback for how awesome this is!

Srs watch the whole thing, it's awesome

(thx Chuggers)

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