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Post by Apple on Tue Mar 31, 2015 11:47 pm



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BdnmCzzD-YQ

I made this in 4 days after a pretty long hiatus. I wanted to thank people in the video, but the formatting got really weird, so I just deleted it. Here's what it said.

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Lukking: For reminding me how awesome this game is.
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Kramwood: For inventing the pancake.
Everybody Else: Because this is the best community I have been a part of, and you guys are all really co-PURE! I was gonna thank pure for being awesome, too.
YoBanjoJoe: For being in that clan with me oh so long ago.
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Post by OTDE on Tue Mar 31, 2015 11:59 pm

Dude, sweet! Tons of creative ideas in that. I loved the little, subtle recycles, especially near the beginning!

There were some places where I felt like there was a lot of waffly floaty bits where you were trying to get him out after an awesome recycle. Those should go away with time and practice.

Fun track, I want more Smile

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Post by RyderLR on Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:55 am

Oh my gosh this track was really quite awesome! I had to replay that moment at 0:52 over and over because I loved it so much. I'm honored to be one of the people you thanked, please please please make more Very Happy

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Re: Rutabaga

Post by Yobanjojoe on Wed Apr 01, 2015 5:15 am

Beautiful. Oh my god, you've improved so much, I noticed some elements from your style from ages ago which was really cool.

Also line llamas or whatever it was called, haha.

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Post by Apple on Wed Apr 01, 2015 7:33 am

@Yobanjojoe wrote:Also line llamas or whatever it was called, haha.

LINE LLAMAS, oh man. Good times.
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Post by Z_N-Freak on Wed Apr 01, 2015 7:41 am

Sweet track dude Smile

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Post by gaoyubao on Wed Apr 01, 2015 9:38 am

This was great, and I get to expect better? That's awesome!

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Re: Rutabaga

Post by Pawel3 on Wed Apr 01, 2015 4:07 pm

DEM RECYCLES
try to avoid bosh bumbing into flings and bouncing around. It feels cool to "recycle" the fling, but the outcome looks crappy lol (I mean, I can't forbid that, do whatever you want :| )
edt: nvm, there were no moments like that. I'm seeing things

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Post by roflmaoqwerty on Wed Apr 01, 2015 5:49 pm

OH MY GOD I DIED AT 0:53 THAT WAS SOME PARTY CRASHER LEVEL CHEESE

quite a boopin track, a lot of fun vibes and plenty of awesome and oh-so-difficult space recycling that you made look effortless. awesome job, great to have ya back in the game

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Post by Opal Rider on Wed Apr 01, 2015 6:04 pm

I think the song actually helped out a lot with this one, and just made the whole thing feel so smooth. It's the type of track that just sorta puts you into a trance until the track is finished, and then you wake up and go "I missed that, time to watch the entire thing again." And not even in a bad way, I love it when that happens.

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Re: Rutabaga

Post by shammies on Wed Apr 01, 2015 6:35 pm

What a wonderfully smooth track.
Love the choice of using Tennyson for the music Thumbs Up

Continue to make more swell tracks!

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Post by theacp127 on Wed Apr 01, 2015 11:07 pm

I liked it a lot, but I felt the quirk was a bit uncontrolled and jerky. Other than that I loved those buttery smooth manuals. Remember that when making quirk that you want it to feel fluid and controlled. If it just doesn't feel like that then just delete it. This will help the quirk blend with the smooth manuals better and keep the track feeling consistant.


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Post by Apple on Thu Apr 02, 2015 8:19 pm

I thought it was smooth enough. It was more about space recycling than it was about flow though. I could have made it tons smoother if I weren't throwing it into the center again and again.
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Post by Xanth on Thu Apr 02, 2015 10:36 pm

Great job for something made in 4 days

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Post by Tempest190 on Thu Apr 09, 2015 11:36 pm

I honestly loved the stall for this track it looks like bosh just gently fell into position, gives it a really unique feel.

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Post by rabid squirrel on Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:17 pm

I do want to review this even though I'm 2 months late. But I don't have any big overarching observations so I'll just point out parts I particularly liked Smile

- liked the granual + recycle right at the start
- airtime at 0:33 into tailie was nice
- flippy thing at 0:37
- 0:43 - 0:49 was just super fun! love the space recycling
- awesome recycle at 0:50
- excellent music sync at 0:52
- nice airtime at 0:55
- 0:59 - 1:03 was super fun and flippy. These bits remind me of anomaly.
- love the "pause" at 1:12
- interesting kinda-no-rotation part at 1:18
- lolol @ cat sound

Hope to see your new project very soon! Smile

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