No way Out- Darklight

not quite up to my top standards. it needs a lot of shading, along with some variety, but I realized that I could do much, much better, so I decided to end it without detail, and start a new style. The naked track is BLUE by Olecool. Thanks to bubbles for the recording. I know there is no editing, but that is because my old crappy imovie isn't compatible with mp4's. it just doesn't take them.




oh yeah, and how do you widescreen embed?

@ rep - please don't ask for it, it's considered rude...

@ widescreen embed - read the sticky called "how to embed" - it's very thorough.

@ no editing - iMovie should take .mp4's but if it doesn't, use www.media-convert.com and convert it to a .mov. No quality loss.

@ track - good style and consistent, but felt rather repetitive. Throw some variety in there!

^ it did seem repetitive and also the scenery was kinda...uh.... unwhole. But it was still good, and so was the track. overall i would say it was a meh track

Shame you didn't continue the scenery off the screen, you could see where it ended, which is bad, also some parts were a bit empty. Enoguh with the bad things - I think it's a great way to scene a quirk track, should have done a bit more shading, but it looked pretty good, nice work.

you can see where the scenery ended cuz i probably have a bigger screen than he has or w/e

anyways, why isn't there an HD option on yt? that weird
pretty sweet track, scenery could've used some work but i liked it
i could've also edited it for you if you wanted me to though

Pretty awesome, could have used some more detail on the scenery though

Pretty much the same as everyone said, could use more detail, and scenery ends. But I like the style you have. Great job. ^_^

Seeing the track is by olecool, I won't comment on that too much-
It's pretty nice though, nice flow for the most part; has the hallmarks of a good, solid quirk.

Scenery felt like clutter sometimes, like it was just put there because you couldn't think of anything creative to put there... then again, and again, and again. It's not a matter of shading, it's just concept and placement of lines to me...

The scenery seems like it was just tacked onto the track- it doesn't really add any value to the movie itself.

Rather, what you should strive for, is have the scenery make the track more entertaining; complement the track, or even stand alone from it, like TD's scenery.

huh? who negged me for posting a track on irtl?

i liked this track you really are headed in the right direction dont give up the scenery it was nice just some more ideas to throw in there and your set. The track was really nice and it had a nice feel to it keep it up

It's very hard to scene quirk,

better than I'll ever do, so +rep!