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7rn - Lost Island

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Post by 7rn Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:32 pm



This is my latest video, also im new here, first ever time at IRTL! woot :]
any suggestions? comments? kthxbai 8D

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Post by Nubcake Wed Aug 19, 2009 8:25 pm

wow that was awesome. everything about it was great. even the recording which i think made it seem a little slower. but the track and the flow and the scebery were all AWESOME!! great work keep it up!!!!!!
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Post by rabid squirrel Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:13 pm

I liked the scenery a lot, and the track wasn't bad. I thought the track could have some more speed (and the recording should be much faster too), and the scenery could have had some kind of theme or idea instead of being sort of random. It also seemed pretty short.

Other than that, great work, especially for a newcomer Thumbs Up
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Post by Purtle Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:23 pm

The scenery was better than i expected. Recording could use work. Track could be a bit better as well.

Not bad at all though. Like rabid said, good work for a new guy/.
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Post by baconat0r Fri Aug 21, 2009 9:00 am

That shark and tree was awesome. i would have liked it if you continued that maze thing all the way around that area instead of that small part.

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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:48 am

That shark was awesome....not sure why it was in a cave though. The track wasn't bad, but you have a huge potential for scenery!
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Post by CuddlesTheCactus Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:37 pm

Great track and scenery, but there were some weak points in both... but good work
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