Entwined

thanks boo for recording

wow you got manuals. You're improving fast
keep the good work!

Wow, you're learning quick!

Those manuals were great, and they can only get better from here. Try to focus on balancing them, meaning, try to prevent him from swaying side to side too much. The smoothness of the curves was pretty good too, but making them more round will improve the aesthetic of your track and you might find it makes it easier to balance.

Your flow has also improved dramatically, making this track a lot more pleasurable to watch than anything you've done before. Good job

Shotoku wrote:Wow, you're learning quick!

Pawel3 wrote:You're improving fast

^^^

I was really surprised to see so many manuals this soon. Great job man. I have nothing to say other than what shotoku said -- work on balancing manuals, try to make curves circular, and keep up the good work! Oh and try more tail manuals. Tail manuals are awesome.

Personally I find that XY is easier than quirk because it's more systematic and easier to manage. Much better than your previous tracks, keep on going!

Hey look who is improving and pretty quick too, now anyways I saw some decent manuals, wells and xy. I did like the sync of the track, it was good and the density was not bad itself as well. Though one thing I will say is keep working on making your wells stronger as well as your xy and make sure to have a lot of rotation in the xy as well, overall that was a pretty decent track.