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Post by Stallie Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:22 pm

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Post by Fauxfyre Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:31 pm

The flow was good but the sync could have been better. Overall a pretty good track Keep it up! Wink
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Post by efrazable Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:45 pm

I'm not worthy.

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Post by Cereal Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:53 pm

shotoku wrote:The flow was good but the sync could have been better. Overall a pretty good track Keep it up! Wink
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I'm not quite following. The sync to the flow was actually quite good, but the overall goodness? idk, it's a tough call.

Nice track!
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Post by OTDE Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:53 pm

I like that you're not making as many ugly stacks, and I'm enjoying the improved flow! That being said, I'm not exactly diggin' the shape of the manuals. Sometimes manuals look super cool when they're not perfectly circular, but these felt sloppy, like they were an afterthought in comparison with the alty stops and stuff.

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Post by roflmaoqwerty Tue Sep 04, 2012 9:10 pm

Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y. Kinda have to agree with OTDE on the manual shape, but definitely an entertaining track throughout for the most part.
Oh yeah, and the blaring "CLICK HERE TO LIKE/COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE" is a nice touch.
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Post by Ph0enix Tue Sep 04, 2012 9:14 pm

OTDE wrote:I like that you're not making as many ugly stacks, and I'm enjoying the improved flow! That being said, I'm not exactly diggin' the shape of the manuals. Sometimes manuals look super cool when they're not perfectly circular, but these felt sloppy, like they were an afterthought in comparison with the alty stops and stuff.

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roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y. Kinda have to agree with OTDE on the manual shape, but definitely an entertaining track throughout for the most part.
Oh yeah, and the blaring "CLICK HERE TO LIKE/COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE" is a nice touch.

These guys pretty much summed it up for me. Nice track though!
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Post by Chui Ninji Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:32 pm

Your wells are alright and those manuals are not bad as well; overall It was a pretty decent track, keep it up. Smile
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Post by Opal Rider Tue Sep 04, 2012 11:41 pm

roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y.
Lol, never heard anyone use that term before... Actually felt sorta good.

As for the track, I actually like where this is going. The biggest area of improvement I can see here is the alt flings, which are a lot better shaped than some of the g well clouds that you used to use in place of them. The flow was also improved rather nicely, and what can be said on the manuals has already been said.
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Post by Sssschiller Wed Sep 05, 2012 8:05 am

Ooh...I can't watch it Sad stupid German youtube
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Post by Stallie Wed Sep 05, 2012 1:23 pm

Sssschiller wrote:Ooh...I can't watch it Sad stupid German youtube

You want the .sol?
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Post by Sssschiller Thu Sep 06, 2012 10:38 am

Would be great Wink
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Post by Stallie Fri Sep 28, 2012 9:52 pm

Shotoku wrote:The flow was good but the sync could have been better. Overall a pretty good track Keep it up! Wink
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Thanks. Smile

efrazable wrote:I'm not worthy.

*bows*

You're still good.

Cereal wrote:
shotoku wrote:The flow was good but the sync could have been better. Overall a pretty good track Keep it up! Wink
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I'm not quite following. The sync to the flow was actually quite good, but the overall goodness? idk, it's a tough call.

Nice track!

Alright then thanks. Smile

OTDE wrote:I like that you're not making as many ugly stacks, and I'm enjoying the improved flow! That being said, I'm not exactly diggin' the shape of the manuals. Sometimes manuals look super cool when they're not perfectly circular, but these felt sloppy, like they were an afterthought in comparison with the alty stops and stuff.

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Yeah I'm not stacking much and if so then I delete unnecessary wells if so. I see where you went by the manuals not circular so yeah.

roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y. Kinda have to agree with OTDE on the manual shape, but definitely an entertaining track throughout for the most part.
Oh yeah, and the blaring "CLICK HERE TO LIKE/COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE" is a nice touch.

Thanks Smile

Ph0enix wrote:
OTDE wrote:I like that you're not making as many ugly stacks, and I'm enjoying the improved flow! That being said, I'm not exactly diggin' the shape of the manuals. Sometimes manuals look super cool when they're not perfectly circular, but these felt sloppy, like they were an afterthought in comparison with the alty stops and stuff.

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roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y. Kinda have to agree with OTDE on the manual shape, but definitely an entertaining track throughout for the most part.
Oh yeah, and the blaring "CLICK HERE TO LIKE/COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE" is a nice touch.

These guys pretty much summed it up for me. Nice track though!

Yep and thanks.

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Ph0enix wrote:
OTDE wrote:I like that you're not making as many ugly stacks, and I'm enjoying the improved flow! That being said, I'm not exactly diggin' the shape of the manuals. Sometimes manuals look super cool when they're not perfectly circular, but these felt sloppy, like they were an afterthought in comparison with the alty stops and stuff.

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roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y. Kinda have to agree with OTDE on the manual shape, but definitely an entertaining track throughout for the most part.
Oh yeah, and the blaring "CLICK HERE TO LIKE/COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE" is a nice touch.

These guys pretty much summed it up for me. Nice track though!

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Chui Ninji wrote:Your wells are alright and those manuals are not bad as well; overall It was a pretty decent track, keep it up. Smile

Thanks chui that means something. Smile

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roflmaoqwerty wrote:Felt nice, chill, and Opal-y.
Lol, never heard anyone use that term before... Actually felt sorta good.

As for the track, I actually like where this is going. The biggest area of improvement I can see here is the alt flings, which are a lot better shaped than some of the g well clouds that you used to use in place of them. The flow was also improved rather nicely, and what can be said on the manuals has already been said.

Yeah I could use a bit work on those g wells and yeah the manuals.

Sssschiller wrote:Ooh...I can't watch it Sad stupid German youtube

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Sssschiller wrote:Ooh...I can't watch it Sad stupid German youtube

You want the .sol?

Sssschiller wrote:Would be great Wink

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Post by ACwazHere Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:01 pm

It made me release my bowels.

JK. Pretty sweet stuff. I liked the sync to the flow of the track. Keep doing quirks and you'll be pro pretty soon. Very Happy Oh and work on making your curves more circular. =P
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Post by efrazable Sat Sep 29, 2012 5:59 pm

That bump was pretty sexy as well.
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