New first track. Intruder (VERY SHORT)

*SORRY FOURM HAS DISABLED MY LINK* MY NeW TrAck. www . youtube . com/watch?v=bdCCFwl6zTU&list=UUlqSxIPrx4qm1U9p_OMljDw&index=1&feature=plcp

JUST REMOVE THE SPACES!

Was decent for you first track

Not much to say really.

Just keep playing and improving, can't wait to see more from you

Thanks mate. The stupid fourm makes me wait 3 more days untill i can post external links :-/

haha love that wrtl at the end. represent!

my next one is better

This actually isn't bad, for being one of your first. There are plenty of scenery tutorials on YouTube, and a few fellow sceners on the site who would gladly answer questions (not me, unfortunately). As for the track, it seemed to go downwards quite a bit. Maybe try to make him go upwards every once in a while to mix it up.

Thanks Opal!

My main bit of advice is to be directional. Try going up or left rather than down or right all the time.

Fun little bit, though. And any track that has "WRtL" in it has to be good.

That was short...
I like how not messy this looks for a first track, you kept everything looking nice. Wasn't too great but there wasn't really anything bad to say about it other than try making the track go up at sometimes too and put just a little texture details into the surrounding rocks.
6.5/10
Oh, and record the track at the right speed. It is kind of annoying when it is sped up like that, even when it was just a little.

I'm sorry. my computer runs Linux and that is the best qualty i can do. And i am improving on my next track.

it was great for what it is. nostalgically reminded me of the good old days, where track quality didn't matter so much as the story.

..and then it ended so abruptly that I didn't even get a chance to comprehend what I just saw. (in some cases that's a good thing but in this case it's not.) As consequence here I am sitting in front of the computer discontented and feeling robbed. in all honestly it felt like an intro rather than a track.

but it was a first track. you can only go up from here. so soar you go

Thanks Pure.

Nice track As Pure said, you can only get better Try to extend your tracks a bit more, too.

Also, nice Moonbase Alpha reference in your sig.

Nice short, it was a neat track and the scenery was alright as well, keep it up.