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Paradox - Opal
by Opal Rider Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:26 pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7USjHy8Vus
This, is my ToC4 entry. I'm just a tiiiny bit happy the way this turned out.
This, is my ToC4 entry. I'm just a tiiiny bit happy the way this turned out.
Last edited by Opal Rider on Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:07 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by OTDE Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:40 pm
Whoa, that was awesome. I enjoyed the way you integrate 
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Opal Rider Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:22 pm
In depth reviews are always welcome. 
.... *cough cough*. But no, really. I'd like to know your dislikes as well as what you thought was good.
.... *cough cough*. But no, really. I'd like to know your dislikes as well as what you thought was good.
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by RyderLR Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:58 pm
I thought that was awesome and really enjoyed it but only 50 seconds? waahhhh I was just starting to love it
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Rafael Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:14 pm
Aw, short 
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Great job on the all blue part. It was really enjoyable throughout the entire track. I was kinda sad when it was over.. Good blue manuals. Didn't realize it was all blue until it was finished (even though I read the description before).
. Great job on the all blue part. It was really enjoyable throughout the entire track. I was kinda sad when it was over.. Good blue manuals. Didn't realize it was all blue until it was finished (even though I read the description before
).
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Ph0enix Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:27 pm
Why must you be soooooo much better at all blue manuals than me. 
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Opal Rider Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:43 pm
Yeah, I started to get fed up with all blue towards the end. Also, thanks to my girlfriend for making the first well of the fling @:23.
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Cereal Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:19 pm
Everything was great besides that first well of the fling @ 0:23. (Seriously, what were you thinking thar? )
But in all seriousness, it was a surprise to me that it was all blue! You also seem to have a really good feel for flow. That part near the end reminds me of Instinct's style a bit.
It was definitely on the short side, but enjoyable nonetheless.
)But in all seriousness, it was a surprise to me that it was all blue! You also seem to have a really good feel for flow. That part near the end reminds me of Instinct's style a bit.
It was definitely on the short side, but enjoyable nonetheless.
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by efrazable Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:01 pm
IT'S A COLLAB! CAN'T BE ENTERED IN TOC!Opal Rider wrote:Yeah, I started to get fed up with all blue towards the end. Also, thanks to my girlfriend for making the first well of the fling @:23.
RAGE 
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Opal Rider Sun Mar 18, 2012 9:29 pm
efrazable wrote:IT'S A COLLAB! CAN'T BE ENTERED IN TOC!Opal Rider wrote:
Oshi-
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by chaomocha Sun Mar 18, 2012 10:20 pm
HA ^
really liked your pinches, those were very smooth and well made. all in all a good track, keep it up!
really liked your pinches, those were very smooth and well made. all in all a good track, keep it up!
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by WishLine Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:23 pm
WishLine track rating system
Section 1 – Track Creation (4 Points out of a possible 5)
Section 6 – Scenery (X Points out of a possible 25)
Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (4 Points out of a possible 20)
Scened = N/A/100
Naked = 44/75
Final Score = 59%
Score-aid
Section 1 – Track Creation (4 Points out of a possible 5)
- Spoiler:
- Track had suitable titles and credits = +1
Track had fitting music = +1
Track had a special feature (all blue, all red, a plot, special editing, music syncing, super-long) = +2
Track was >1 minute in length = +1
- Spoiler:
- Track had quite smooth curves = +1 –OR– Track had very smooth curves = +2
Track moved left as well as right = +1
Track moved up as well as down = +1
This track had some sort of basic flip or loop-the-loop = +1
Track had a good pace = +1 –OR– Track had an extremely fast pace = +2
Track flowed nicely = +1 –OR– Track flowed extremely well = +3
- Spoiler:
- Track had nose manuals = +1
Track had tail manuals = +2
Track had head manuals = +2
The track executed a manual loop = +3
Track was >50% manuals = +3 –OR– This track was primarily a manual track = +5
Some of these manuals could be regarded as ‘high-speed’ = +2
- Spoiler:
- This track had gravity wells = +2
Some of these wells were in lengthy chains = +2
Some of these made a loop or spiral = +3
This track had flings = +2
These flings were varied, long and impressive = +3
This track had a special manual (granual, flanual, Kramual etc) = +3
This track was primarily a quirk track = +5
- Spoiler:
- Track started at a good speed = +1
Track ended with a good or funny crash = +1 –OR– Track ended with a good standstill = +2
–OR– Track ended with a recognised stall = +4
- Spoiler:
- Track attempted some scenery = +1 –OR– Entire track was scened = +3
Scenery was consistent and realistic = +3 –OR– Scenery was abstract and entertaining +3
Scenery used good shading = +2
Scenery did not leave unattractive white space = +2
Scenery had a good monument = +3 –OR– Scenery had several good or one exceptional moment = +5
Scenery had impressive detail = +5 –OR– Scenery had stunning detail = +10
Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (4 Points out of a possible 20)
- Spoiler:
- A basic score out of twenty to illustrate the author’s personal enjoyment of this track = 4
Comments: Nice! Very good for all blue, especially the smooth speediness that is the end. The 'close-quirk' midsection was impressive too.
I think it demonstrates some great skill, but nothing that made me 'wow', as such. Well done though!
Naked = 44/75
Final Score = 59%
Score-aid
- Spoiler:
- Below 20% = Newbie
20-29% = Emerging
30-39% = Average
40-49% = Decent
50-59% = Good
60-69% = Great
70=79% = Excellent
80-89% = Supreme
Over 90% = Epic
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Re: Paradox - Opal
by Chui Ninji Sat Mar 24, 2012 5:09 pm
I wish it was longer. It felt kinda...unfinished. And I was expecting more manuals and less quirk/flatsled. I liked that little part after the pinch though. Kinda wish you made it longer. I wouldn't be totally opposed to you revisiting this and extending it.
Also...animusic.
I wouldn't be totally opposed to you revisiting this and extending it.Also...animusic.
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