Break the Silence - DLP

Here it is. The long shortly awaited track. It is a short one, this is mainly because I have trouble concentrating on things for long periods of time (blame Facebook for this). Hope you leik!

i really loved the beginning, pretty awesome track

THAT WAS AMAZING!

You have a lot of potential, but it was a pretty good track over all.

I liked it. Especially for being your first track on here, that was pretty bawss. There were a few places in the scenery where I couldn't really tell what something was, but as a whole it looked very good, and were those AGWs partway through the track?

Very nice.

I'm really pleased to see a new person scening a track Impressive and enjoyable first go! Please make more!

You seem to have a good grasp of what scenery is all about, what looks good, how to shade it

Now, if you were looking to develop your skills - and don't feel like you have to - you may want to zoom further in and draw smoother lines to make your curves more graceful. You might even want to try nose manuals

Best of luck! I hope you're enjoying yourself!
Wish