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Post by Pinter Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:39 pm

Hey, This is a anniversary track because I made one year ago my real first manual.. so a manual anniversary track.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oQtP4RjSbAI&list=UUtk-jaXV-txVjeU5hFf2JLA&index=1&feature=plcp

> Youtube hates my music, it's not doing want I wanted to let it do. :|

On the end I got bored and I still am bored and down Eep
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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:58 pm

very nice! Lots of fun to watch!

Advice from me would be to focus on keeping tension and excitement going some more - more pressure, sudden changes, keep the audience on their toes more, etc. But more importantly keep making tracks and making them better and better!
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Post by Stallie Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:16 pm

That was a very nice track pinter, the smoothness of yours curves have improved and so have you wells, you did a good job, keep it up. Wink
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Post by Chuggers Sat Feb 18, 2012 11:38 pm

You are getting good fast Very Happy

Very enjoyable all the way through whataboss
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:50 am

You make this tracks so fast! Awesome!
Cool manuals and good music choice = good job Smile
And it's one year now? D: time is running fast!
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Post by SETH Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:55 am

i'm more a quirk fan, but your track is pretty fun, and your manual are very nice mastering
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Post by WishLine Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:10 am

I do like a good manual track. And that's exactly what this is. A good manual track. Very impressive. Well done. Pacey, generally smooth curves. Hope you enjoyed making it, I enjoyed watching it Smile

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