Element Clan: In Too Deep

Here are some negatives that don't encompass the track itself:

- The editing was very plain/bad. Honestly. The titles at the beginning were like "lolwut." Then, I expected to know who made what or even who is in the clan. I've never heard of this clan and I have no idea who is in it or who made what. No credits or color playback to tell me anything. Is this your first clan track as a whole clan? I have no idea.

Te track itself was coolio. The song didn't feel right with it, but the track was still coo. Also, it was very short for a clan track, which made the whole video under 1 minute.

Votale wrote:Here are some negatives that don't encompass the track itself:

- The editing was very plain/bad. Honestly. The titles at the beginning were like "lolwut." Then, I expected to know who made what or even who is in the clan. I've never heard of this clan and I have no idea who is in it or who made what. No credits or color playback to tell me anything. Is this your first clan track as a whole clan? I have no idea.

Te track itself was coolio. The song didn't feel right with it, but the track was still coo. Also, it was very short for a clan track, which made the whole video under 1 minute.

iXotic was the one who edited this, so don't ask me, you should ask him why he did what he did. Anyways, thanks for your support.

Title got a chuckle out of me.

TheRevTastic wrote:Title got a chuckle out of me.

This, but it needed more ponies.

Didn't prefer the track. It looked like you attempted tricks you weren't ready for, and in the end, it looked sloppy.

^^ agreed, and I would only have a beginning/ending monument if it was actually that, a monument that is good. Otherwise, that is what editing is for. I would also work on the speed of it, it felt kind of sluggish for the style and those tricks.