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[OTDE]--Chorus

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Post by OTDE Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:41 am

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Post by Derpinator Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:43 am

nice song Very Happy

i really liked the rotation xD and it was an awesome track general 8D
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Post by Sheldon Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:49 am

Style
9/10
You had so much great OTDE style in this track. Your curves a certain luck and feel to them, which is a good thing.
Control
8/10
You had pretty good control. A few manual curves looked rushed though. That pinch recycle looks like it took a lot of control.
Skill
8/10
You definitely showed more skill in this track then your previous ones. You had some more advanced flings and such.
Fun
10/10
Those rushed curves makes it look like you had fun making them. That animation was really fun, however I feel you could have edited it in a bet better.

Overall
8/10
I feel this is same old OTDE with a touch more technical skill. The animation was great, and the flow was good. I can wait to see the next in this song serious. Very Happy


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Post by Helios Pavonine Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:48 am

0:54 FTW!

Music fit really well. You need to do some more speedier stuff Smile
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Post by Cereal Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:35 pm

It was great for the most part, but there were a couple sections where I could tell that you didn't really put as much effort into. Try to be more consistent. Wink

Animation was cool.
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Post by Stallie Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:48 pm

I like it, the manuals are smooth and your editing is very good. Thumbs Up
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Post by Opal Rider Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:02 pm

LCC! owait. Great track, bro, You've really improved your quirk. It's sort of a messy manual style that really seems to flow well, and I'm really not sure how you make it work. Keep it up.

Oh, and I'm not banned anymore, so I'm back, I guess. (Dad was just having a rough day.)
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Post by linerage Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:09 pm

It seems really rough, but still entertaining.if you make something like this in a more refined version, it'll be even better (Y)
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:38 am

That was great!
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Oct 14, 2011 5:02 pm

I loved the constant rotation in the track Very Happy
The animation was superb! A great addition ^^
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Post by shammies Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:35 am

Oh linerider, what a great toy it was for me.
That was a really good track. I honestly don't know why I am commenting on this track, or even here in general.
Guess I just wanted to stroll down memory lane.
Anyways, great track! keep on bucking those apples.

sidenote: Rarity is best pony.
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Post by SETH Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:32 am

i love the flow and the constant speed !
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Post by efrazable Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:04 am

shammies wrote:Oh linerider, what a great toy it was for me.
That was a really good track. I honestly don't know why I am commenting on this track, or even here in general.
Guess I just wanted to stroll down memory lane.
Anyways, great track! keep on bucking those apples.

sidenote: Rarity is best pony.
Luna pwns.
HOW DARE YOU RUN IN FEAR FROM ME! YOU SHOULD BE FEELING HAPPINESS AND JOY!
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