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Post by redcap Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:51 am

BlargBlargBlarg

So I came out with a new track. w00t.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZo4Z34CpFw

And for all you lazy people like me...


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Post by Wolf_Spirit Thu Jul 30, 2009 3:59 am

Amazing! The first X-Y part was really good! You had a great flow and kept to the same speed throughout! Great work 8D
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Post by Hedgehogs4Me Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:21 am

This isn't my favourite track from you Sad
I thought it had a lot of not-so-well-placed airtime, and a major lack of consistency when it came to lines that do a lot vs. lines that don't do much on their own, if you see what I mean.
It had its moments, though.

Make an XY plz 8D
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Post by Nubcake Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:56 am

that was nice, had nice flow even with all the style changes.
overall a good track
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Post by redcap Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:06 pm

Hedgehogs4Me wrote:This isn't my favourite track from you Sad
I thought it had a lot of not-so-well-placed airtime, and a major lack of consistency when it came to lines that do a lot vs. lines that don't do much on their own, if you see what I mean.
It had its moments, though.

Make an XY plz 8D

I do see what you mean, but if you look closely there is a lot of moments were I gwell then wall, then gwell then wall. But I do it so well that it looks like bosh isn't doing anything ie a weak well. Its a different kind of granual to me that I like. I hope this is what you were talking about.

and I'm already working on one. Wink

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Post by Slyther Demon Thu Jul 30, 2009 5:04 pm

I'm with Hedge, your XYs are much better than this omniquirkish type thing. It was an OK track, but some parts killed it for me, like the fling near the beginning, it looked sloppy.
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Post by StingDaFling Thu Jul 30, 2009 5:44 pm

too bled, sloppy, too much airtime, weak wells,.
didnt like it as much as your other tracks

not in the mood for good reviews
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Post by Se7eN Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:58 pm

Nice Job, but im not into the style
Make an xy!

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Post by Purtle Sat Aug 01, 2009 11:02 pm

For some reason i wasnt quiet feeling this one.

It was alright, maybe you're just a bit rusty ;D
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Post by rabid squirrel Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:53 pm

I dunno what everyone is talking about, this was fun! Great stuff, always changing and showing off something new Smile
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Post by redcap Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:43 pm

^ I couldn't agree more Smile ^

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Post by LineMagiX Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:32 pm

StingDaFling wrote:too bled

...

what?
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Post by RayquazaKid Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:01 pm

:|

Good track. Like the XY parts (You even did some XY recycling in there!) My one complaint though, is that the flow felt a bit erratic at times, especially at the beginning. He seemed to go different speeds sometimes. That looks bad if you ask me. Try to be more observant of that. Otherwise, everything checks out Smile Good job on the ending. Right when he reached the stall area he simply fell into place and stayed there without moving (I would call that not moving). And it’s an XY stall that’s real nice. I think this track could have been longer considering the quality of it.

Recording was good. Playback quality was normal and so was picture quality. Editing is looking good too. Good job. Minus points fer killing your viewers :| (jk)

All in all it’s a good track. Its flow was really the only flaw I was able to find, and the problem wasn’t even that bad (but it was worth mentioning). Awesome, can’t wait to see moar Very Happy

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Post by rabid squirrel Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:48 am

I LOVED the "erratic flow"! That was what made it cool! 8D
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Post by Rafael Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:10 am

RayquazaKid wrote::|

Good track. Like the XY parts (You even did some XY recycling in there!) My one complaint though, is that the flow felt a bit erratic at times, especially at the beginning. He seemed to go different speeds sometimes. That looks bad if you ask me. Try to be more observant of that. Otherwise, everything checks out Smile Good job on the ending. Right when he reached the stall area he simply fell into place and stayed there without moving (I would call that not moving). And it’s an XY stall that’s real nice. I think this track could have been longer considering the quality of it.

Recording was good. Playback quality was normal and so was picture quality. Editing is looking good too. Good job. Minus points fer killing your viewers :| (jk)

All in all it’s a good track. Its flow was really the only flaw I was able to find, and the problem wasn’t even that bad (but it was worth mentioning). Awesome, can’t wait to see moar Very Happy

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Sweet stuff redcap, I liked it alot Smile.

You are slowly creating a very own style, just perfect it Wink
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