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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Jul 23, 2011 12:32 pm



I had a lot of fun making and editing this Smile Enjoy.

EDIT: Updated the description.


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Post by rabid squirrel Sat Jul 23, 2011 12:45 pm

I don't know how you can call it a masterpiece, and over half of it is XY so it seems like an afterthought to make it an omni, but it wasn't bad and I can see that you are improving.
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Post by Stallie Sat Jul 23, 2011 12:56 pm

There was more xy then anything else, i agree rabid but the XY is right on, for the standerds for today. The manuals where actually smooth and your quirking and flings had streangth for the most part and the flow of the track made it fun to watch. Over all it was very good, its nice to see that you have improved HP. Wink
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Post by SETH Sat Jul 23, 2011 1:04 pm

very good track overall, i love the song! nice work
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Post by efrazable Sat Jul 23, 2011 1:12 pm

I love the song. A lot. I hope I can get that good at fling quirks.
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Post by Jam Sat Jul 23, 2011 5:43 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:over half of it is XY so it seems like an afterthought to make it an omni
This.

Other than that, it was a pretty decent track. Not a fan of the kramual usage, but eh...
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Post by Votale Sat Jul 23, 2011 5:56 pm

I hate it when people call tracks masterpieces because people never stop improving... So it's as if they KNOW this will be their best track ever or something.

Anyways... haha the direction on the XY was failed, but the XY itself was great, just fix the direction. The rest was also nice, but it coulda been longer :P
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Post by pure5152 Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:59 pm

that was really great, hp! you've really improved man o__o

can't wait to see what's in store? xD
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Post by Cereal Sat Jul 23, 2011 9:05 pm

This isn't really a "masterpiece". That basically means that this is the best you'll do in a long time, or ever do.

XY was nice! It was very different than most XY's you see today. It was interesting how you actually used "freestyle" as a style.

The track was kinda short, especially for a "masterpiece". :P
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Post by Helios Pavonine Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:33 am

rabid squirrel wrote:I don't know how you can call it a masterpiece, and over half of it is XY so it seems like an afterthought to make it an omni, but it wasn't bad and I can see that you are improving.

I wanted it to be all XY, but ragequit.

efrazable wrote:I love the song. A lot. I hope I can get that good at fling quirks.

Just practice Wink

Votale wrote:I hate it when people call tracks masterpieces because people never stop improving... So it's as if they KNOW this will be their best track ever or something.

Anyways... haha the direction on the XY was failed, but the XY itself was great, just fix the direction. The rest was also nice, but it coulda been longer :P

For me, this is a masterpiece. I've never been able to make a track in which I show everything I've got in store... But you've got a point, I'm still improving. Thanks for the XY comment, Roborant was actually a major inspiration for the XY part Wink

pure5152 wrote:that was really great, hp! you've really improved man o__o

can't wait to see what's in store? xD

Thanks Pure. I'm working on a quirky track now, I hope it looks great in 40 fps.

Cereal wrote:This isn't really a "masterpiece". That basically means that this is the best you'll do in a long time, or ever do.

XY was nice! It was very different than most XY's you see today. It was interesting how you actually used "freestyle" as a style.

The track was kinda short, especially for a "masterpiece". :P

Thanks (I forgot you in the credits for the manual part Sad)
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Post by Summoning Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:01 am

You're definitely improving as everyone has said, but work on your well strength D:. I couldn't even tell if some of them did anything. I liked your manuals though, make more of them :|.
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Post by Yobanjojoe Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:34 am

that was really good.

you've already gotten better then me lol.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Mon Jul 25, 2011 8:26 am

Summoning wrote:You're definitely improving as everyone has said, but work on your well strength D:. I couldn't even tell if some of them did anything. I liked your manuals though, make more of them :|.

Story of the wells:

I didn't delete the stacks in the XY part (sorry Chui), 'cause Bosh kept crashing. I kinda didn't know how to stack while making the XY part, but after that every well is stacked to the max (except for the spidey fling, didn't really care). The well loop is fully stacked.

You won't see any manuals from me anymore, I'm a quirker now 8D
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Post by Jam Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:17 pm

Helios Pavonine wrote:You won't see any manuals from me anymore, I'm a quirker now 8D
In that case, you lost all respect I had for you. Not for being a quirker, but for believing that quirkers can't ever manual.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:33 pm

Jam wrote:
Helios Pavonine wrote:You won't see any manuals from me anymore, I'm a quirker now 8D
In that case, you lost all respect I had for you. Not for being a quirker, but for believing that quirkers can't ever manual.

That's not what I meant xD I've seen Shimmy... What I meant was that I'll only do some quirk for a long time now :P
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Post by Summoning Mon Jul 25, 2011 6:39 pm

Manuals are the coolest
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Post by Hotflash Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:46 pm

teach me how to enjoy editing plz..
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Post by Helios Pavonine Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:00 pm

I edited it using Corel VideoStudio Pro (the free trial version!). I imported the recordings and music, chose some nice titles, added some effects to it (the zoom), rendered it as MP4-HD and then I was done.

It's easy as pie, but I did spend some hours on it because I'm not very skilled with editing programs.
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Post by efrazable Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:52 pm

Hotflash wrote:teach me how to enjoy editing plz..
You have to like the song you are using. And don't have a headache.
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